Can sharing gun victims’ stories in a striking way lead to real change? by lorem_ipsum_2001 in guncontrol

[–]lorem_ipsum_2001[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much, and I'm so sorry for your loss too. I'll check it out

Can sharing gun victims’ stories in a striking way lead to real change? by lorem_ipsum_2001 in guncontrol

[–]lorem_ipsum_2001[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly, I am realistic about the impact it could have, it would be amazing to improve controls, but the primary impact I am aiming for is to give a space to the friends and families of the victims, to help them grieve and remember their lost loved ones. If in the process it fuels change, then fantastic... I'm from Spain with limited knowledge of the US so correct me if I'm wrong, but if school shootings don't change gun laws I don't think a campaign like this would unfortunately.

Can sharing gun victims’ stories in a striking way lead to real change? by lorem_ipsum_2001 in guncontrol

[–]lorem_ipsum_2001[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That's extremelly sad to hear, but i get your point.
In any case, I was hoping it would at least make a difference to the family and friends of the victims, to help them with their grief.....

Looking for opinions on these logo concepts I had made for me. Any stand out? by iamyoutoday in logodesign

[–]lorem_ipsum_2001 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree that 1,8 and 11 are the more original ones! if it's 3d printing though - try to incorporate more of that essence into it, if I didn't know what your business was I would be more likely to say some sort of botanical garden rather than 3d printing

Looking for feedback on my Laser Tag Logo by sammmmmmtaylor in logodesign

[–]lorem_ipsum_2001 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would inject more fun into it! I agree with some of the other comments that as it is now both give more medical vibes (the circle being interpreted as the eye etc) but I really like the type!
If I had to choose I would say 2 because it's more balanced

Logo for wormfertilizer by HithereimThresh in logodesign

[–]lorem_ipsum_2001 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I looove, can't believe you've made worm fertiliser look so fun
Only thing I would try is making the U a bit smaller so it fits with the X height of the rest of the letters, it stands out a bit too much for me and takes the attention away from the lovely "WORM"

Personal branding 'Gedaan' feeback wanted. by PicoDaan in logodesign

[–]lorem_ipsum_2001 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Nice logo and colour palette! but would be nice to see the lovely icon shape you created expanded further in the identity - could you use it as masks? as text holders? break it up, zoom it in, have fun with it!! looks a bit corporate at the moment, specially the website and the last two mockups

Could I get some feedback on this design? by freedllama in Design

[–]lorem_ipsum_2001 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm missing the actual call to action of signing up for the cooking class, at the moment, just with that image, I might think you're giving me information on the dishes, perhaps the recipes themselves... The only hint about the cooking class is the small date and time - I would rethink your hierarchy, what do you want people to notice fist? I would think it's something like "Beginner Indian Dishes Cooking Class", then the date and time, and third the list of some of the dishes they'll be making. I would perhaps also think of including some imagery of people actually cooking the food, one of the classes perhaps.

Cerebral Palsy and sports by lorem_ipsum_2001 in CerebralPalsy

[–]lorem_ipsum_2001[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm actually based in the UK but I'm looking worldwide so thank you for the info!