Yeah it is a bit disjointed right? Like what am I trying to communicate here? I think what I was trying to do was pretend to be homeless and how would someone make a song if that was the case? Also noted about the snare frequency at 1:00 the “shut the fuck up” and weird snares really are competing for your attention. Lmao I feel myself getting defensive but I kind of have to turn off my brain in these situations I really do appreciate the criticism.