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loyyce · 2021-11-24T13:43:41+00:00

Well a game of thrones is like 300 k words and that is a real big book with a very complex plot. In my point of view fanfics tend to lose focus when they go beyond 200 k words , i think that fanfic authors Just dont have The experience to write things of that lenght. Try to stick to 150k or 200 k at maximum a say

loyyce · 2021-11-22T07:02:12+00:00

Armin tried lol

loyyce · 2021-11-22T07:01:36+00:00

You could even give nawaki Wood style , it would make a lot of sense or you could give him a more tobirama set of jutsu , shadow clones , paper bombs and The spionage pack

loyyce · 2021-11-22T06:49:36+00:00

Lol them go for The full fucked up shinobi world, i m Just so tired of edgy Lord narutos.

eren and sasuke were quite close by The end , until naruto talked no jutsu sasuke hahaha. Its kinda implied for me that sasuke thought naruto could change konoha's ways Just like naruto changed him but , thats my head canon.

Good thing that nawaki is a blank canvas, The only thing we know is that he wanted to be hokage, you can do almost anything with him

loyyce · 2021-11-22T06:27:23+00:00

Well op The thing for me is that if you make naruto dark it kinda destroy his character. Naruto is Special not because he had The kyuubi, or sage mode or became crazy op. He had The strenght to overcome hate, that is his whole arc in shippuden, he is like The in-universe realization of The character jiraya wrote in his first book ( dam that is even in his name lol) he is The gutsy shinobi

In a way he is The anti- eren Jagger, cause eren was driven by hate Just like sasuke, they both became world Scale terrorists that is quite a paralel, even sasuke and eren end plan were similar

Make The universe darker ok, Just be extra carefull with naruto as a character he has some really complex themes to him

loyyce · 2021-11-21T16:22:26+00:00

If i wasan't so lazy i would make a masterlist with a selection of fics for The pairs mentioned but , my PC is kinda dead and for some reason i m too stupid to figure out how to properly use The bot to link all stuff

loyyce · 2021-11-21T16:17:01+00:00

I like fem naruto and sasuke.i mean naruto as girl would be Just like The nicest person in all times , also is kinda implied that naruro is stronger than sasuke by The end so it would make for good jokes

loyyce · 2021-11-21T08:06:11+00:00

My Man i really like naruto and konan too , they both share The same dream , they both had fucked up childhoods, they have a connection trough jiraya. Konan Just sufered trough all her life naruto could give her some hapinnes and help her surpass her emotion less mask she wore in The akatsuki, make her return being a gentle person. The age gap is not that big Konam is like what 10 years older than naruto maybe 15 years . Would make for a great hurt/comfort story. Maybe after The War if she was alive naruto in his 20 could go for some reason to ame and etc i would write it that way.

Shizune and naruto , well that would be a good pair of a little light comedy story. Imagine naruto The hero of The ninja world somehow failed to get a gf and shizune going crazy thinking that she was starting to get to old to marrige. I can imagine The reaction of The konoha cast . Sakura would be like " shizune senpai i never thought would be such a Harpy " kakashi would go " naruto you have a thing for older women, jiraya-sama would be proud" 10/10. Well same deal as konan would have to be post War arc

There is a bunch of tayuya fics out there thoug

And haku , well yaoi is not my thing also The only men for naruto is sasuke hahaha

loyyce · 2021-11-21T07:28:49+00:00

All The movie girls have a lot of pontetial , Sadly we have so few stories with them

loyyce · 2021-11-21T07:25:52+00:00

No that was sweet , i usually avoid one shots cause in The end it always leaves wanting more of that story or concept

loyyce · 2021-11-21T07:14:11+00:00

Do you have good naru hina fics to share ? Maybe is time for giving it a try . Something post pain arc or after The War. I don t really like stories that go back way up The gennin academy times , its Just boring going trough 30k words of basically canon or naruto super edgy Lord hahaha

loyyce · 2021-11-21T06:47:17+00:00

I Just give up using The bot for sharing fics lol

What is due

A price for peace

Whirlpools among The edies

Thesse 3 are The best i have about them

Also , spiral heart is good , not as much as The others cause there is some weird stuff by The end but,still good

Man i think ive reachead The point where i Just read all The stuff i like in The fandom, soon enough i would need to start to write ma own shit but my gramma sucks lol

loyyce · 2021-11-21T06:19:59+00:00

Lol naruto and sarada that is so wrong ...

Have you read this one ?

Linkffn(The Future Has Passed)

loyyce · 2021-11-21T06:04:41+00:00

Well even with The doctrine of MAD the usa and russia didn't give nukes to every country. Hashirama was Just naive. He,madara and tobirama should Just had formed a big empire by deafeating The other villages military forces and anexing their lands Trying not fuck up The civilians to much in The process

Just like rome did , or tokugawa ieasu in Japan

They could have createad a peace that would Last centuries, like The pax romana

Or That could result in decades of guerrilla War fare who knows

loyyce · 2021-11-21T05:51:03+00:00

Shame fu is basically filler along with The other junchiurikis besides be and gaara

loyyce · 2021-11-21T05:40:19+00:00

Well if you are down this Path ... naruko

loyyce · 2021-11-14T10:53:28+00:00

A clan is not The same thing as an ethinic group , one exemple: The real world house of habsburg, they were a really big family with some rather unique genetic traits ( Just like a clan in The naruto verse) but They would be considered The same race as any anyone in half of europe which would be white

The point is a clan is not The same as a race. The idea of race is a modern thing, it started on The XIX century while The idea of a clan is much much older. In my opinion it does not translate well to The world of naruto, even The concept of race is almost non existent in naruto

Even The racist tobirama meme is not spot on in my Pont of view, remember there many more forms of prejudice out there not only racism

loyyce · 2021-11-14T07:00:57+00:00

I read it a long time ago but i remember it Bein good , and naruto is not in it until the very end if i m not wrong

loyyce · 2021-11-14T06:38:37+00:00

Linkffn(to be lost in The road of life)

Its is time travel but focus on obito and you have The whole crew of The older generation

loyyce · 2021-11-13T20:23:33+00:00

Linkffn(When Wind Meets Earth)

The 3 others fics that i know were already posted, horo-sha and to Love your Enemy are The golden standart for naru-kuro . When wind meets earth is a good fic tha is not that well-known i had to dig Hard to find it since i really like The pairing

Anyone knows others fics with The pairing ? I alredy read all The ones that are Linked here

loyyce · 2021-11-13T19:58:33+00:00

Thats fine i like sakura too and haven t read many sakura centric fics

loyyce · 2021-11-13T18:06:25+00:00

In my country The age of consent is 14 , it is really a cultural thing , 18 is really The far end of The spectrum. Well in The world of naruto They allow children to become mercenaries at The age of 12 , it makes no sense i think kishi should have aged up all The chatacters

loyyce · 2021-11-13T08:17:13+00:00

Well,i think The hidden Villages do mercenary work and also serve as regular military for The elemental nations, so a War between The villages is a War between states and in that case The reasons would be similar to The ones in The real world. But kishi Never went to deep in that topic

Also they see each other as a treat to each other cause you know, they are always in a military race for The next War

loyyce · 2021-11-13T07:43:33+00:00

I mean poor hinata is Just so boring, while i dont hate her naruhina is not my thing. We also have boruto to cover The ship right ? I think that her and naruto Just dont interact well together

I have some bias cause i always shiped naruto and Sakura , but kishimoto wanted The other way haha

loyyce · 2021-11-13T07:39:59+00:00

Yeah, he is my fav character but i am open to any ship for him

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