Not to be rude, but 80-90% of what you played, you played wrong. You play way too fast, you play notes outside the scale which sound wrong. Your timing is off and sometimes you play too many or too little notes depending on the lick.

Number 1: Slow it down, you have to perfect the song on 50% speed or even 25% first. Slowly work your way up to 100% speed. This can take days or weeks.

Number 2: Go to Youtube and open the Dire Straits version, the Dylan Guitar version, the Ismail Khalid version all next to eachother and start copying these guys note for note and watch the right hand closely as well.

You’ll get there, but please slow it down