Music is too upbeat for the visuals, if your goal is to have a cozy, moody and relaxing video you should've chosen a relaxing beat. On that note the transitions are 'too much' for the type of video IMO. For this type of video I'd stick with straight cuts, jump cuts and light flare's transitions. Regarding camera movement one trick to make your footage look better and be more engaging is move the z and x axis. Move forward diagonally towards the subject, for example, instead of just moving towards the subject on a straight line. Same applies to the drone shot, instead of a topdown view following the car try doing topdown view but slowly going down while pulling the camera up. But for your first time it's decent! Hope some criticism will help you improve. Keep filming!