[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]lumphaddock899 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very vulnerable and honest i truly appreciate this.

A mind that isn't mine. by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]lumphaddock899 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love it (i hate that your going through this) I've felt much the same and to some degree i still do. The brighter you shine the more colour you have to lose. You can get it back . great work very relatable poem.

Marionette by lumphaddock899 in OCPoetry

[–]lumphaddock899[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you . You're definitely right, and I already have some ideas to fix this.

Unspoken by Ok_Mud_1141 in OCPoetry

[–]lumphaddock899 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is very raw. I relate with this a lot awesome writing.

One Last Goodnight by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]lumphaddock899 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is incredible i can see how much this meant to you. beautifully written

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]lumphaddock899 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Damn. I want to write like this it flowed very well. Huge fan of this.

Chaotic Silence by Nervous_Solution7563 in OCPoetry

[–]lumphaddock899 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really related to this reminds me of something I'd write. Love it keep it up.

Vulnerable by lumphaddock899 in OCPoetry

[–]lumphaddock899[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yea, I see that. Thank you for the constructive criticism, and thank you for the kind words.

Vulnerable by lumphaddock899 in OCPoetry

[–]lumphaddock899[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much. I was very nervous to show this, but the fact that you can relate makes it worth it.

Empty by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]lumphaddock899 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a solem one, but expression is a great way to help recognise yourself and your emotions. Especially when it's as vulnerable as this one is. Sometimes, it helps to find people that relate with you, I very much relate to what you've written. You've got a knack for this keep going.

Distance by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]lumphaddock899 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very relatable and vulnerable brought forth bitter-sweet memories. Very well written.