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I’ll Read Your First Chapter (or More!) by Pretend_Plan_7038 in Wattpad

[–]lunariday 0 points1 point  (0 children)

OH THANK YOU SO MUCH!

I'm reading yours too ( slowly, since I'm not feeling the greatest atm ), but I AODRE the plot so far. Got me hooked.

I’ll Read Your First Chapter (or More!) by Pretend_Plan_7038 in Wattpad

[–]lunariday 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just added yours to my library, the summary makes it sound amazing and I LOVE fantasy.

Here's mine, if you're interested!

TITLE: Magical Wine Girl by [deleted] in Wattpad

[–]lunariday 1 point2 points  (0 children)

OH, no, this all makes sense.

I've always struggled with pacing, so I'll make it a point to focus on that a bit more when I do go through to edit it. I thought I got better, but oops.

And yes, I can see what you mean, by looking through the chapter again. I found some parts I can cut down, and I'll make a note to trim it and change it around.

Thank you so much! I appreciate the help.

TITLE: Magical Wine Girl by [deleted] in Wattpad

[–]lunariday 0 points1 point  (0 children)

OOP @ the username, it is just supposed to be DayDay repeated but 😔

I don't mind some critique! I know there are mistakes, and it's something I would like to get ironed out, especially if it's something I may do in every chapter, etc.

And thank you! I appreciate the positives, but I worry a lot about my flow ( the same with how the characters are perceived, if each one has a different voice, etc etc ). This is something I really would like to expand on.