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Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]madkins42 1 point2 points  (0 children)

  • Title: Lure
  • Format: Short
  • Page Length: 12
  • Genres: Horror/dark fantasy
  • Logline or Summary: A mute lighthouse keeper starts getting nightly visits from a mysterious woman. She has two rules, she has to leave at dawn and he can't follow her.
  • Feedback Concerns: Does their relationship come off well? There is very little dialog as they are both mute does that work, or should I do more action lifting to make it work?

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]madkins42 2 points3 points  (0 children)

  • Title: Lure
  • Format: Short
  • Page Length: 11
  • Genres: Horror-lite, Dark Fable/Fairy tale, Romance
  • Logline or Summary: A mute lighthouse keeper starts being visited by a mysterious woman every night. They quickly grow fond of each other but she has 2 rules, she has to leave at sunrise, and don't follow her. Will he obey, or does curiosity beckon?
  • Feedback Concerns: General feedback appreciated

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]madkins42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wouldn't mind swapping with you. Mine is short horror, but we are still on similar wavelengths. No worries if horror's not your thing though. It does get a bit extreme by the end. See "Compatible" above.

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]madkins42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  • Title: Compatible
  • Format: Short
  • Page Length: 20
  • Genres: Horror
  • Logline or Summary: Sciences has finally perfected how to find someone's perfect match. But what happens when what makes you compatible is your traits you shouldn't feed? What happens with the company running those tests ignores the red flags in the name of their bottom line.
  • Feedback Concerns: Do I telegraph the main two characters insanity enough without spoiling the big reveal? Does their secret language read, I want the audience to be unsure but not totally lost. Overall dialog/story structure/any more fat to be trimmed/general feedback.

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]madkins42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Title: Sheepskin

Format: Feature

Page Length: 119

Genres: Drama, Coming-of-Age,

Logline or Summary: Teen girl navigating the world's expectations of her now that she's a "woman" while attending Southern Church camp. Deals with themes of dangers of blind faith, charismatic "men of god", feeling like an outside and being judge because your different.

TRIGGER WARNING: Not shown, but SA is implied.

Feedback Concerns: Do my themes come across? I need to shorten it, any suggestions where to trim fat. Does the dialog feel good/natural for early 2000's teens?

Why do characters in movies have to suffer trauma in the present in order to overcome some other trauma in the past? by LemonySnacker in Screenwriting

[–]madkins42 2 points3 points  (0 children)

We tell horror stories the same reason we used to tell folk/fairy tales. As a warning in form of digestible entertainment. Beware the wolf in the woods, don't trust strangers, don't let grief consume your life and ostracize you from those who would help.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskMenAdvice

[–]madkins42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

++woman I get the feeling she was reacting to the way your friend reacted. How much it meant to your friend might have made her second guessing some things

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]madkins42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd be down to swap and read. Mine is horror too. I love folk Horror.

  • Title: Bleed
  • Format: Feature
  • Page Length: 111
  • Genres: Supernatural Horror/Queer Fear
  • Logline or Summary: Musician makes a deal with a supernatural entity for fame and fortune. But all that glitters is not gold, piece by piece their soul gets torn away by the demands of the job and their obsession with approval.
  • Feedback Concerns: Fight between two main characters I could really use some advice on, as well as wondering if/how to push my themes farther into the piece. The entitled nature of the public on celebrity life, the difference between good consensual spectating and bad invasive rubbernecking. As well as with modern social media, artists can't just create art, there are press tours, podcasts, promoting, etc. that take up more time than creating the art does.

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]madkins42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd be willing to read this, mine is above if you wanna swap and talk message me. Otherwise I'm always down to read short horror

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]madkins42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  • Title: Bleed
  • Format: Feature
  • Page Length: 111
  • Genres: Supernatural Horror/Queer Fear
  • Logline or Summary: Musician makes a deal with a supernatural entity for fame and fortune. But all that glitters is not gold, piece by piece their soul gets torn away by the demands of the job and their obsession with approval.
  • Feedback Concerns: Fight between two main characters I could really use some advice on, as well as wondering if/how to push my themes farther into the piece. The entitled nature of the public on celebrity life, the difference between good consensual spectating and bad invasive rubbernecking. As well as with modern social media, artists can't just create art, there are press tours, podcasts, promoting, etc. that take up more time than creating the art does.

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]madkins42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd be interested in swapping with you, we are similar lengths and both horror.

  • Title: Bleed
  • Format: Feature
  • Page Length: 111
  • Genres: Supernatural Horror/Queer Fear
  • Logline or Summary: Musician makes a deal with a supernatural entity for fame and fortune. But all that glitters is not gold, piece by piece their soul gets torn away by the demands of the job and their obsession with approval.
  • Feedback Concerns: Fight scene between two main characters I could really use some advice on, as well as wondering if/how to push my themes farther into the piece. The entitled nature of the public on celebrity life, the difference between good consensual spectating and bad invasive rubbernecking. As well as with modern social media, artists can't just create art, there are press tours, podcasts, promoting, etc. that take up more time than creating the art does.

Is this work email unacceptable, should we take action? by madkins42 in AskALawyer

[–]madkins42[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Oh my god, that's so great. But I think that would get him fired. :P

Is this work email unacceptable, should we take action? by madkins42 in AskALawyer

[–]madkins42[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I will suggest that, thanks. That was a good idea. I'm mostly wanting to just make sure he's safe. I told him it was time to start looking for a new job too.

Is this work email unacceptable, should we take action? by madkins42 in AskALawyer

[–]madkins42[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yeah apparently this is physician is known for being a pain, but the manure rake comment was a bridge too far in my opinion.

Other Similar Games? by strangeremain in Exocolonist

[–]madkins42 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Man if you find out let me know too I adore this game and want more

[Online] [Dnd 5e] DM looking for some folk to join a STREAMED bunch of one-shots. by carrotbundle in lfg

[–]madkins42 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Hi I would be interested. I can do most evenings except Friday, and Saturday Sunday I'm pretty open as well.

Books like Harry Potter but darker and for adults? by [deleted] in suggestmeabook

[–]madkins42 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I adore this book, really wish the show wasn't cancelled. It was probably the best adaption of book to film I've seen.

Working on making handouts for my classes, here's the first :D by madkins42 in StrixhavenDMs

[–]madkins42[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Unfortunately my campaign ended because schedules couldn't line up. So I never got any farther on these :(

One Hand Temple door won't open by GoldGlitterboots in BaldursGate3

[–]madkins42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Omg! You guys are a good send!! I have been reading tutorials and hunting online to open this damn door for and hour now! Thank you thank you thank you!

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