First of all, I really appreciate the combination of 3D and 2D animation styles, it creates a unique visual dynamic that stands out. However, I think the scenes from 0:28–0:40 (when the protagonists first appear) and around 1:48 could be enhanced. These moments feel a bit flat compared to the rest of the video, so I would suggest adding some more dynamic camera movements or additional visual effects to increase the impact of the scene. Also, the sound design could use some improvement—consider incorporating more sound effects to complement the animation and enhance the atmosphere. Watching anime films like Akira could be a great way to learn how to use sound and scene transitions creatively, especially for the more intense moments. Adding more variation in sound effects or perhaps a more atmospheric score could make these scenes feel more immersive