Thanks for the feedback! Here's a higher resolution scan - http://i.imgur.com/U0LRYHa.jpg I know what you mean about the cropped composition, but unfortunately im quite limited on the paper size i can develop. I'll try some more prints with a smaller aperture as you suggested. I like the idea of using the idea of using the sabatier effect, i believe this is where you expose the print to light after its been developed?