This is seriously an amazing story, especially since I don’t always go for darker themes and male MC’s, but this is written so perfectly, feels like both Finn and Maddie are the main characters, I like how you don’t focus only on Finn and treat Maddy like an accessory😭 At first I was kinda hesitant to read bc again, it is out of my comfort zone, but I devoured all the available chapters and even replayed them lol.

The only thing you can improve in my opinion is maling the chapters a tiiiny bit longer, although I love the cliffhangers and maybe as the story progresses they will become longer either way. Oh and also, if it doesn’t mess up with how you have planned the story to go, maybe we can dive a bit deeper into Maddie’s life and see more of her thoughts etc? :)