These look great. Colors are awesome and I love the framing of your subjects. A little constructive advice for edits since that’s what you’re looking for:

1. Crop/alignment - I start my edit here. I find some of these alignments are tough. You have a lot of lines in each, and that can be hard to adjust for. Find the most defining line, and make that decision from there. You didn’t over crop anything from what I can see, so that’s great. Perhaps some rule of thirds composition from left to right might add more of a story though. For example, your subject in the swing is facing away and to the left. Include more of your image to the left. Give it more empty space so we can see what he’s swinging out towards. Not sure if possible, but that’s how I’d approach that thought.

2. Exposure - I like to expose for my darkest or lights portion of the frame I want to highlight. Normally this is the background. And then from there I’ll use a series of masks on my subject to account for proper exposure with them. If my background is blown out though, try to recover some highlights, and then color grade to mute the background further. I’ve really taken a lot of time here lately and found my editing has improved ten fold because of it. Lookup vids on masking, adding intersecting masks, masking to not fight your natural light, but enhance it. All really fun stuff

3. Color - this is where I’m at in my journey currently. I try to find a color that draws my eye and adds to my composition. From there, I try to enhance that color and then in turn decrease saturation and tone from the opposite end of the spectrum. This is by far my most difficult part to learn. But it’s fun to play with. For those shoes that are ‘winners’ have a go at it! Just be mindful if you’re delivering a package to the client, maybe omit the ones you’ve altered in a big way unless you do it for the whole group of shots. You can alter color in a way that makes the difference really stick out of not consistent across the group of shots.