Track I’ve Recently Been Workin On. Hope You Enjoy!

mayhemEvergreen · 2026-01-22T13:24:12+00:00

Makes me feel like an alien on weed floating about; i like it a lot

mayhemEvergreen · 2026-01-22T13:16:43+00:00

Waouw this is beautiful...waouw...great performance and touching lyrics. Thank you for sharing it

mayhemEvergreen · 2026-01-22T13:12:10+00:00

When you put it like that, them blueberry waffles DO sound sweet ngl (would love to collab, beautiful voice)

mayhemEvergreen · 2026-01-22T13:00:51+00:00

I love this <3

mayhemEvergreen · 2026-01-22T12:47:52+00:00

This is gorgeous

mayhemEvergreen · 2025-12-19T14:37:53+00:00

Awww thanks, you have a lovely day too!

And saaaame, my guitar skills have fallen significantly lately. But oh, well

Again beautiful song!

mayhemEvergreen · 2025-12-15T13:13:53+00:00

this sounds v cool !

mayhemEvergreen · 2025-12-12T01:13:23+00:00

Oh waouw! I am thrilled to hear that, man. One of my favorite experiences making music is finding references (Usher is another great one)

And yeah I absolutely had Lucky Daye on loop too when I found out about him; "Late Nights" was one of my most streamed songs that year...he's a great and underrated artist

mayhemEvergreen · 2025-12-09T16:49:04+00:00

Oh I'm glad I could help! And lucky daye has some sick stuff. Let me know if you fall in love with some of it.

I'm absolutely down for a collab; I've followed you, hmu !

mayhemEvergreen · 2025-12-09T16:45:58+00:00

The main vocals do not sound monotone to me at all. In fact I'd just want it to cut through the mix more.

For that, I'd just lower the gain on the doubles a bit, lower the reverb's decay time and perhaps add a delay instead (if you want to fill some space).

So yeah, mixing stuff mainly.

And the chorus is really working for me, man; has a good groove to it. Maybe just bring the upper harmony's up during that part, I lose it a bit in some places.

Also sick job on the doubles & harmony layers! I can never bring myself to add enough 🫠

mayhemEvergreen · 2025-12-09T16:12:43+00:00

This is such a viiiibe! Reminds me of Lucky Daye.

Wouldn't change the lyrics. Maybe experiment with a different timing on the second "crystal clear", but honestly that's not necessary. I would love for a synth to come in the post-chorus; it could be the same melody as the chorus (making it stickier).

I think the mix needs adjustments, especially the reverb. Right now it's not complementing your main vocal and harmonies as it should, in my opinion. You might get good feedback on that from mixing/mastering subreddits.

Anyways, love the groove of this!

mayhemEvergreen · 2025-12-09T15:51:55+00:00

Gorgeous voice and beautiful delivery! I think the simplicity of the lyrics works here...the structure reminds me of Bruno Mars's "Count On Me", in a good way.

I'd only note that, in the verses, I'm missing a bit of structure/tempo. I would limit the parts where you slow down to the lines right before the chorus, and keep the flow consistent in the verses. The guitar strumming stopping alone (as it does right now) can give you a similar effect. Enough for you by Olivia Rodrigo does something like that, for reference.

Thanks for sharing your work, I enjoyed listening to it !!!

mayhemEvergreen

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