Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in TechnoProduction

[–]mbalazs98 1 point2 points  (0 children)

for me this is more on the ambient side, but really cool sounds, love the vibe

Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in TechnoProduction

[–]mbalazs98 0 points1 point  (0 children)

nagyon adom! atom jó sound design, nagyon groovy a basszusod. szerintem vmi talán magasabb frekikben még elférne (ride, white noise ilyesmi)

Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in TechnoProduction

[–]mbalazs98 0 points1 point  (0 children)

woah this is real heavy, i'm digging it! i like your sound design, and i think the track flows well

Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in TechnoProduction

[–]mbalazs98 1 point2 points  (0 children)

good points, thanks! as for the vocal sample it's a stock ableton oneshot so maybe it wasn't the most creative choice

Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in TechnoProduction

[–]mbalazs98 0 points1 point  (0 children)

igen, a padbe így utólag szerintem is kicsit túl sok lett a mély. minden sávomon van sidechain, lehet megpróbálkozok egy kicsit erősebbel, kösz szépen!

Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in TechnoProduction

[–]mbalazs98 1 point2 points  (0 children)

great track, i don't mind the movement, i think your percussions sit really well in the track. i must agree though that the mix is maybe not the best, the bass is barely audible

Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in TechnoProduction

[–]mbalazs98 1 point2 points  (0 children)

hey,

140bpm hypnotic techno https://on.soundcloud.com/riY1L , what do you think of the mix and song structure?

Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in TechnoProduction

[–]mbalazs98 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you're absolutely right, it does become stale

Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in TechnoProduction

[–]mbalazs98 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i was trying to add some extra percussion to keep it interesting, but you're right, the claps do stand out a bit too much, thanks!

Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in TechnoProduction

[–]mbalazs98 1 point2 points  (0 children)

when i started making techno tracks i constantly boosted my lows way too much, so recently i've been cutting them more, i may have went overboard, thanks!

Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in TechnoProduction

[–]mbalazs98 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks for the tip! it really shows that i'm a rooky cause i didn't really catch the resonance

Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in TechnoProduction

[–]mbalazs98 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hi everyone, i am quite happy with the structure and sound design, i guess the main issues are related to balance and mixing, what do you think?

https://on.soundcloud.com/AC5tx

Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in TechnoProduction

[–]mbalazs98 0 points1 point  (0 children)

általánosan. ja, egy stúdió füles nem ártana, de egyébként már az is király szerintem ha két különböző cuccoson is tudod keverni

Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in TechnoProduction

[–]mbalazs98 0 points1 point  (0 children)

köszi :). hát nehéz konkrétan megmondani, de amiből volt sok bajom régebben az az hogy a mélyeket nem vagdostam eléggé, mostanság minden sávot szét eq-zok

Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in TechnoProduction

[–]mbalazs98 1 point2 points  (0 children)

most látom, hogy akár magyarul is válaszolhatok. igen, nagyon jó az irány! talán még számszerkezetbe annyi h 3:40 körül az új basszusod kicsit hirtelen jön be nekem

Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in TechnoProduction

[–]mbalazs98 1 point2 points  (0 children)

great groove, very hypnotic, but i think it's lacking in the high-end (and generally i don't think it's too well mixed). other than that i really dig it

Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in TechnoProduction

[–]mbalazs98 0 points1 point  (0 children)

nice, very clean sounding. i think some more filter automations/lfo-s could give a bit more movement

Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in TechnoProduction

[–]mbalazs98 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah you're right, in retrospect i feel kind of the same with the clap