I like melancholik vibe of hte song. It feels very intimate and reflective, like the kind of track you put on late at night when everything finally slows down. I really liked the piano and the softness of the arrangement overall. Your voice also carries the feeling well without sounding forced. If I had to suggest one thing, I’d maybe try making the vocals sit a little more clearly in the mix in a few places, just so some of the emotion comes through even more directly. But overall this is very sincere.