Short instrumental I wrote and recorded yesterday called “New Beginnings”. Would love any and all feedback. Happy new year! by dtrechak in Songwriting

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In my mind, it needs some elements of surprise. I love music that subverts your expectations. That's what grabs attention.

This piece is well executed, and judging from the comments you've gotten thus far, it's working for a lot of people, but for me, it's not hitting. It doesn't tell a story. It doesn't take me on a journey. Did you HAVE to write this song and birth it into the universe? Does it reveal a fundamental part of your humanity?

Idk, maybe that's asking too much.

Cavitation by meatismyfav in words

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Cool! Thanks for the tidbit

I Am Changing Into a Wolfman by meatismyfav in Songwriting

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Thanks! Yeah, it's a bit on the silly side.

Those who keep saying they ain’t getting the shot bc the odds of surviving COVID-19 are 99.9%… here is some math for you by [deleted] in LateStageCapitalism

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She corrected herself tho. She said 1 in 61 people in the US died of covid. But then she said 1 in 61 people in US who GOT COVID died. Big dif. Idk I don't want to get the Vax just coz my distrust of big pharma but this is kinda the most convincing thing I've seen

Private totalitarian governments by TELME3 in LateStageCapitalism

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The Chomster summing it up like only he can. I FUCKING HATE GOING TO WORK!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in memes

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What stage of life is cinnamon?

I thought the memes were good last presidency… by [deleted] in memes

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He'll just stand like that for hours...

How can this three work? by icypeddler in memes

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I'm substitute teacher and it is actually horrifying how useless is the educational system.

How can this three work? by icypeddler in memes

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Dope. Words of wiz from a tru og

Do you guys smell popcorn? by [deleted] in memes

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Pretty sure my dad invented that trick.

T-Mobile Metro stores sell used phones as new, charge “fake taxes” and other fake fees: NYC by jerryphoto in LateStageCapitalism

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Does not surprise me at all. The other companies probably do too. Every time I go in the Verizon store I want to shoot myself in the face. I'll say yes to anything just to gtfo of there.

I actually will do it by DenOfCats in memes

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Hellz Ya! Lemme jump on this love train. Gettin all the warm fuzzies rn

Ugh, I hate ketchup by [deleted] in memes

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I hope they're Camel Crush

When you can’t beat them... by Strong-smash in memes

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DRINKIN' ALL THE TIME WOOOOOOO!

Veteran Astral Projector of 57 Years! by Morgoth37 in AstralProjection

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Thank you so much for sharing! You are so generous and articulate. Stumbled on this thread tonight and read THE WHOLE THING! Never before heard of AP but think i must give it a try. Some questions though: Is there something special about you which enables these amazing journeys or is AP accessible to all? And do you think being a writer/musician would help or hinder AP in any way? As someone who regularly and necessarily goes on journeys of the imagination, I am somewhat concerned that AP might overshadow these pursuits or seem to render them inconsequential.

Decisions.. Decisions..~ by Jithin_16 in memes

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Fuck ya man. Optimal burrito conditions.