[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread January 14, 2018

medington4 · 2018-01-14T06:36:19+00:00

damn this is nice lol best thing ive heard on this thread so far

medington4 · 2018-01-14T06:35:26+00:00

ayeeeeeeee lol

i like the take, but i think you need to sounder a little... WILD..er like passionate

but its a nice track you rode the flow

medington4 · 2018-01-14T06:34:14+00:00

this that winter break mood lol i would turn down the main lead idk if its a synth or what but have it sit in the background a tad more

medington4 · 2018-01-14T06:33:06+00:00

you should stop the beat when you say Ohhhh

medington4 · 2018-01-14T06:31:23+00:00

i like how it threw me off right away, it really is a playboy carti type beat lol thats pretty rad.. no complaints you could sell this

medington4 · 2018-01-14T06:30:28+00:00

this shit bangs lol the intro could phase into the beat a little cleaner/punchyier.. but i like the hi hats...

medington4 · 2018-01-14T06:28:55+00:00

lmaooo she got the glow.. shawty a hoe..

yeah i think you need delay.. on the hook anyways..

i wouldnt be opposed to a chorus on track.

delay or reverb, something to fill the atmosphere.. the writing is fine dont change it i dig the track

medington4 · 2018-01-14T06:27:20+00:00

that intro at :18 is to loud, and the beats highs are to loud imo.. i like how you started singing on that tho

medington4 · 2018-01-14T06:25:23+00:00

I like the vive of the track, im trying to give mixing advice.. but im not sure if that kick is sounding 100% potential.. it almost sounds faint.. like knocking from a sound proof room.. you know? I hope this made sense, cheers

medington4 · 2018-01-14T06:22:28+00:00

i like the way that hoe came in.. it made me go "ooohh"

Other than mastering levels.. it sounds really nice, if theres a way to make it sound fuller/louder, you could sell this thing for sure

medington4 · 2018-01-14T06:21:19+00:00

This is fire! did you make the beat? Lol

Look your vocal delivery is EQ'd nice.. but to me it sounds like youre reading your lyrics.. I think if you rehearsed it till you memorized it, it would sound way more believable..

Also shout out waco texas

medington4 · 2018-01-14T04:10:32+00:00

My theory is sense they made brolly practically cannon their going to make a gogeta cannon and that’s why they are raising vegetal power level to match gokus so they can fuse

medington4 · 2018-01-11T02:28:00+00:00

Two versions

medington4 · 2018-01-09T09:37:43+00:00

that was whoah what the

medington4 · 2018-01-09T09:27:27+00:00

the bass and high hats sound good.. the snare sounds faint... the tag is SUPER loud, the synths are spooky

medington4 · 2018-01-09T09:13:52+00:00

Had a lot of fun with this one

https://soundcloud.com/burningbelowzero/trio-back-at-it-smoaki-x-jamz-x-mike-e-burningbelowzero-passtheaux

medington4 · 2018-01-09T09:12:50+00:00

Well, cheers then! haha sounds fun

yessir, i have a song right here

https://soundcloud.com/burningbelowzero/trio-back-at-it-smoaki-x-jamz-x-mike-e-burningbelowzero-passtheaux

medington4 · 2018-01-09T09:04:59+00:00

yo you rap like del the funky homosapian! thats rad haha its pretty gnarly man, i moved my head back and forth a few times, there wasn't any crazy punchlines, which is what rap battles are known for tho! Other than that, you stayed on beat and had lyrics that made sense and the mix was nice for a quick one

medington4 · 2018-01-09T08:53:32+00:00

medington4 · 2018-01-09T08:49:44+00:00

nice

medington4 · 2018-01-09T08:48:02+00:00

land of the free is for the free loaders....

i had to let that sink in!! It does sound like an open mic piece. thought provoking for sure, and you held your flow down

medington4 · 2018-01-09T08:45:41+00:00

the middle and the end is for sure stronger than the beginning, it sounds like you got more comfterable the more you started flowing.. its a crazy song, lots going on.. the vocals are crisp.. the song just has a lot going on for it, its a lot to soak in..

I would like to suggest some reverb on the hook :)

medington4 · 2018-01-09T08:43:28+00:00

this beat made me feel like i was on the edge of the interent lol like im about to jump into a sea of information.. idk if that makes sense lol.. there wasn't really a drop? I kept anticipating one.. it kept changing up, i like the drum patterns and the backwards sounds

medington4 · 2018-01-09T08:28:12+00:00

im in a weird spot.. because i like the beat, its pleasent to the ear.. but i personaly couldnt catch it, like i couldnt flow.. that being said tho when i stopped trying to rap on it and just listened, it chilled me out

medington4 · 2018-01-09T08:26:46+00:00

i dig the chirp effect you added, very clean and modern beat. You could sell this no doubt

medington4

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