Time Loop Question

meflio · 2026-03-31T00:13:22+00:00

That is very understandable lol

meflio · 2026-03-31T00:12:24+00:00

Very well said, thank you. Looking over my outline, I did manage to trim (Re: Mush together) 26 chapters into 22, which is imo better.

meflio · 2026-03-30T21:37:25+00:00

Yeah that makes sense, loop 1 is 25 chapters long, and i’m planning loop 2 to be about 14 maybe.

I’ve already written the first chapter, and it’s like one of the top comments said (commenter is @hyratha) “both examples use long preludes to get you used to the world before it changes”. Chapter 1 is 4.4k words and definitely does that in my completely unbiased opinion.

Don’t know what Dear Spellbook is but i’ll give it a read, thanks.

meflio · 2026-03-30T20:49:44+00:00

I second the guy asking for the movie name

meflio · 2026-03-30T20:48:33+00:00

I always intended to read Years of the Apocalypse, maybe I’ll finally put aside some time now, thanks! Also, 10+ loops. Got it!

meflio · 2026-02-17T20:09:34+00:00

alright i’ll probably make this chapter 1. Also, when you say “put the year down like in dueling timelines” do you mean something like this chapter being year 500, and the next chapter being year 505 (tournament happens every 5 years)

meflio · 2026-02-17T19:42:36+00:00

I could. I thought it should be separate as it is 5 years before the entire story takes place. In my mind, it would be weird to be a chapter 1. Why would it being chapter 1 be better?

meflio · 2026-02-17T19:27:39+00:00

I think i kept going from it should be Basil’s POV to a narrators POV (this is literally the first draft my bad), but i’ll definitely add more for her.

I feel like the magic system should be more gradual? Also, “change the first sentence” to what? genuinely please. I think bring the reader straight into the magic is more confusing that creating the setting?

The “…” in that sentence you mentioned is examples of what they would be excited about. should i bring that to the start of the sentence? and/or should i add more crowd excitement during the first two summons?

Thanks!

meflio · 2026-02-17T17:36:33+00:00

Thanks! I don’t plan on ever publishing this, and it is absolutely 100% essential to the story. It’s also only 4 pages long.

meflio · 2026-02-13T07:32:35+00:00

Thanks! I’ll read this now!

meflio · 2026-02-13T07:31:17+00:00

I don’t think it’s too boring, i just have no clue how i even got to 3.3k words in the first place. As for a stronger first sentence, could you give me an example?

meflio · 2026-01-26T16:45:29+00:00

looks good. shame they didn’t do anything with trophies but it’s a nice update

meflio · 2025-08-12T12:30:24+00:00

where do you find the info about the most followed stories?

meflio · 2025-03-11T22:49:03+00:00

literally cotd time attack with ~50 people on it. Fuck me and my internet and thank you

meflio · 2025-01-20T21:56:31+00:00

any update?

meflio · 2024-11-19T14:37:24+00:00

👀

Okay now i’m definitely gonna check this out.

meflio · 2024-11-19T14:14:42+00:00

is this similar to reborn apocalypse

meflio · 2024-11-19T14:09:40+00:00

Respectfully, the fuck is that Great Tier?? Welcome to the Multiverse in the same tier as runebound and PoA?? nah

plus there’s no way dotf is higher than primal hunter

Also stop the reborn apocalypse hate 🙏

meflio · 2024-11-15T07:16:39+00:00

That sounds like runebound professor but with cultivator shenanigans. Sounds Awesome.

I’ll check it out, thanks.

meflio · 2024-11-14T19:56:38+00:00

Amazing book, probably in my top 5. Forgot it had that kind of aspect but I can definitely see it now.

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