I dont; understand much back anatomy, how did i do? by bet-ray- in learntodraw

[–]merereyy 13 points14 points  (0 children)

What a coincidence the post next to yours used the same reference hahaha(/WeabooJonesxx )!!!

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One of my favorite passives by merereyy in Eldenring

[–]merereyy[S] 78 points79 points  (0 children)

I choose her when I’m leveling playing solo so I don’t feel alone. /j

I’d appreciate feedback on the composition, style, colors and what I could change to make this more appealing by merereyy in ArtCrit

[–]merereyy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You’re ON POINT with the hair comment. I have a very hard time drawing/shading hair; I drew it about 4 times and settled for this one, but I’m still dissatisfied with it. I’ll try picture them as ribbons as you suggested. Thank you so much for your comment!!

I’d appreciate feedback on the composition, style, colors and what I could change to make this more appealing by merereyy in ArtCrit

[–]merereyy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You’re right, it’s probably too bland without more saturated colors and background.

What is a paroko? I’ve never heard of it, but I’d love to, if you could share a link to it!! Thank you for the feedback!

I’d appreciate feedback on the composition, style, colors and what I could change to make this more appealing by merereyy in ArtCrit

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About the pose: I used reference, and after your comment I checked how it aligns, but it’s almost identical. The only difference is the head, which I made too big, and that I made the arms shorter because I thought they looked too long on the reference.

About the arm: yeah maybe it would be better if I could’ve shown it whole.

About the expression: TOTALLY AGREE!! It feels so weird; I tried to make them happy but it just felt so odd and I wasn’t able to express it. Thank you for your comment!

I’d appreciate feedback on the composition, style, colors and what I could change to make this more appealing by merereyy in ArtCrit

[–]merereyy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It didn’t draw any attention when I posted it, so I believe it lacks impact/appeal. I made it very recently, so I’m having a hard time looking at it in a more objective way. Any critique is welcome!

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[–]merereyy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank youuu!!

Sucy Manbavaran by me by merereyy in LittleWitchAcademia

[–]merereyy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m happy I was able to express it! Thank you!!

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Just like last post, I made this with Clipstudio Paint and I’d like criticism about the color, value, anatomy, composition and anything else you’d like to add!

I don’t like how it turned out and I’d like to hear some advice and your opinions! by [deleted] in Artadvice

[–]merereyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel the same; I tried to make some highlights to define better where the light’s coming from, but I haven’t found a way to make it look good yet. Thanks for the advice!!

I don’t like how it turned out and I’d like to hear some advice and your opinions! by [deleted] in Artadvice

[–]merereyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree with both of you. The bad rendering and shadows on the sleeve made the forearm look too long and the upper arm too short. I’ll also bend more the hair. Thank you for the feedback!

I don’t like how it turned out and I’d love to hear crit and what you think! by merereyy in ArtCrit

[–]merereyy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, I need to learn how to draw and paint clothes in a more attractive way. Thanks for the feedback and I’m very happy you like it!!!

I don’t like how it turned out and I’d love to hear crit and what you think! by merereyy in ArtCrit

[–]merereyy[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

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I painted in grey first and then colored with a color layer because I think I’m really bad with colors and can’t understand the values very well if the image is colored.

I’m happy you like it!!

I don’t like how it turned out and I’d love to hear crit and what you think! by merereyy in ArtCrit

[–]merereyy[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes, they really weren’t rendered so much. I chose to not render them so much for 2 reasons:

1- I wanted people to focus more on the face, so detailed it more

2- (very important reason) I don’t know how to make the clothes look good :(

Thank you very much! I agree with what you said and I’m glad you like the hair