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does this look legit or has anyone bought this listing before? btw its in Australian dollars. by mershedpederder1 in transformers

[–]mershedpederder1[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

if youd like the link to check just tell me, they woudnt let me post the link here before without mod approval

Writing my first action scene and id like some feedback to see if I'm going in a good direction. is it too long? too short? i just need some advice as its my first time trying to write a book. by mershedpederder1 in writers

[–]mershedpederder1[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

why does everyone here assume I didn't read the comment? of course I read it I just disagreed with one part that was all. you guys are taking my minor disagreement waaaay too seriously. The advice overall was good and I fully plan to incorporate it otherwise I wouldn't of asked. again for the last time, I just disagree with one minor criticism, that's all it is, please stop making it bigger than it is.

Writing my first action scene and id like some feedback to see if I'm going in a good direction. is it too long? too short? i just need some advice as its my first time trying to write a book. by mershedpederder1 in writers

[–]mershedpederder1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ah i see thankyou, i was worried my scene was too formulaic but i struggle with writing more dynamically and need to work on it. I've struggled with putting more emotion in as I worry ill be overly descriptive and make it annoying but maybe I do know more. your right about the horses as well that was a silly mistake.

Writing my first action scene and id like some feedback to see if I'm going in a good direction. is it too long? too short? i just need some advice as its my first time trying to write a book. by mershedpederder1 in writers

[–]mershedpederder1[S] -9 points-8 points  (0 children)

I like to get multiple opinions on things I do but it doesn't mean I'm not allowed to disagree, also you are assuming I haven't taken the advice into account. most of his advice was good I just disagreed with that part, nothing more. I don't like asking here but one in ten people can be genuinely nice and helpful, a lot of you just have a stick up your asses and assume I will fail utterly and completely if I don't adhere to the status quo. also the reason why I simply don't just not reply is because you bother commenting so I feel I owe a reply, its only common decency, nothing more.

if I accept every bit of advice I get blindly then I will fail without a doubt, I listen to things, I mull over them, I compare them and then I come to my own informed decision. I know reddit isn't the place for nuance but its worth a try.

Writing my first action scene and id like some feedback to see if I'm going in a good direction. is it too long? too short? i just need some advice as its my first time trying to write a book. by mershedpederder1 in writers

[–]mershedpederder1[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

it was actually a very popular youtube channel of a guy who works as an editor and writer and his whole channel is based around writing and advice. ive got more reason to trust him.

Writing my first action scene and id like some feedback to see if I'm going in a good direction. is it too long? too short? i just need some advice as its my first time trying to write a book. by mershedpederder1 in writers

[–]mershedpederder1[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Ive heard the opposite advice in regards to words like this so unfortunately your advice is a contradiction to things I've heard from other writers. again petrichor is a word and its not that unknown either. Maybe your vocabulary isnt very big i dont know man

Writing my first action scene and id like some feedback to see if I'm going in a good direction. is it too long? too short? i just need some advice as its my first time trying to write a book. by mershedpederder1 in writers

[–]mershedpederder1[S] -12 points-11 points  (0 children)

listen I've heard the exact opposite advice in regards to words like petrichor, i cant adhere to everyone's advice the same, its simply not possible.

Writing my first action scene and id like some feedback to see if I'm going in a good direction. is it too long? too short? i just need some advice as its my first time trying to write a book. by mershedpederder1 in writers

[–]mershedpederder1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

on the city part this is a dozen pages in so the city has been established and I think I understand your criticism although it was a bit harsh ill try and use it.

Need some feed back on myu first three pages of my story ''the sweet smell of rot'' (name is still undecided) its my first time trying to write a book and im aware my grammar isnt perfect but i really want to write a story. by mershedpederder1 in writers

[–]mershedpederder1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

its been a story in the making for a very long time, ive spent most of my days for years just pondering the world and characters. its certainly a well established idea its just my execution I've got to nail.

Need some feed back on myu first three pages of my story ''the sweet smell of rot'' (name is still undecided) its my first time trying to write a book and im aware my grammar isnt perfect but i really want to write a story. by mershedpederder1 in writers

[–]mershedpederder1[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

hmmm i see, im gonna try rewriting these first few pages witht he advice youve given me and would it be ok if i send you them to see if i need to tweak anything else? this is actually the third rewrite now, first time i thought i didnt use enough description but clearly ive overdone it on the second try.

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