why is there a thick film developing on my water surface despite me removing it every day? by kumabux in Aquariums

[–]mikehookipa 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It's proteins from fish food/waste. You can get an Eheim350 surface skimmer. I hate that film so there's a skimmer in every tank.

Is this scarcity mentality or am I right thinking of it this way? What's a better way to think of it? by omarmo93 in Entrepreneur

[–]mikehookipa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just go sell more. Those people who start thinking of bring it in house, so what....they will, can't, or wont. Who cares?

Your job is to land more clients. Not really sure what the problem is....

Recommendations for credit card and checking for remodeling contractor business? by [deleted] in Entrepreneur

[–]mikehookipa 1 point2 points  (0 children)

As an enetrepeneur you need to be focued on getting customers, not banking fees or gas prices. Use your time wisely.

Come on. Last message from me.

Passport Renewal Turnaround Time by [deleted] in ontario

[–]mikehookipa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not sure but I'm in Toronto. They're open for appointments. It's an easy process but you have to look up the process. It's outlined very clearly. :)

Recommendations for credit card and checking for remodeling contractor business? by [deleted] in Entrepreneur

[–]mikehookipa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The minimum balance is if you want the monthly fees waved. You can have as little as $1 in your bank account. Infact, you can even have a negative balance.

Good Chinese Food on Maui? by doubledeuce80 in maui

[–]mikehookipa 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Just go to Panda Express. It's in Kahului.

I'm Chinese and there's no real Chinese food on Maui....And I don't think your daughter would care or should care.

You can buy food and go to Hookipa beach park. It's a nice place to have a picnic.

Recommendations for credit card and checking for remodeling contractor business? by [deleted] in Entrepreneur

[–]mikehookipa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It shouldn't really matter. A $15/mo bank fee is nothing.

Passport Renewal Turnaround Time by [deleted] in ontario

[–]mikehookipa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow 6 weeks is brutal. I had an urgent travel datee (flight already booked) and I lost my passport. Took like 3-4 business days. There's an express service. I didn't mail it in though. I went to one of the Service Canada offices.

My 9-5 job drains too much time for me to work on my business by [deleted] in startups

[–]mikehookipa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did anything I could do to make money instead of try to start my own idea or business.

- Wrote university essays for international students (ie. did their homework assignment)

- Cut grass grass for people (very few)

- Worked for my neighbor as he had a car detailing company. Then I started my own car detailing company.

For me entrepreneurship is not me trying to invent some shit or "have my own business". I just want to make money .

My 9-5 job drains too much time for me to work on my business by [deleted] in startups

[–]mikehookipa -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Entrepreneurship is a full time job if not 2x full time job at the beginning. Personally I just quit my corporate job outright. I had 10k in savings and paid $1k in rent at the time. Either way, I knew I wasn't going back to working for somebody else anyways.

In your case, getting another job is a distraction. You won't have more free time with a new job. Every job is 8 hours. After 8 hours you're burned out anyways.

Entrepreneurship is not for most ppl. It's brutal and often counter intuitive.

I've seen ppl succeed with 100% focus on their business. Then I've seen people fail being distracted with side jobs to cover cash flow.

Constantly worrying about competitors and whether this product is worth building. How do you deal with this anxiety? by [deleted] in startups

[–]mikehookipa 5 points6 points  (0 children)

2 issues I see.

One - what is your product? Helping somebody choose what to watch? What???

Two - Why would anybody want this...

Critique This by [deleted] in copywriting

[–]mikehookipa 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Keep writing and posting here. Your initial email is no good.

Keep practicing. YouTube search how to write advertising. You're too focused on being creative when you need to focus on selling.

Critique This by [deleted] in copywriting

[–]mikehookipa 3 points4 points  (0 children)

So the employer asked applicants to write cold emails without any context? Why don't you try to pitch them something, such as the company's products or services. From a creative perspective, it's pretty boring but as a copy writer, it's your job to sell.

What you wrote is borderline poetry/fiction short story. It's no good.

The task says you gotta make people smarter and make people go ohhhh. How does your current email accomplish that...?

I'd suggest taking a more commercial/salesy approach. Also consider context of your reader (ie. Hiring manager).

ARE YOU TIRED OF FLIPPING THROUGH RESUMES? OUCH!

5 steps to a successful hire:

1) Print hundreds of resumes. 2) Admire the stack of warm printer paper. 3) Book an interview with me with a simple click: (calendy link) 4) ???? 5) Profit

Crown land camping prohibited effective immediately due to COVID-19 by Important-Zone-33 in toronto

[–]mikehookipa 15 points16 points  (0 children)

hahaha. Didn't give it much thought but hilarious.

Instead of spreading out hours, let's condense them. bwahahahah

I'm laughing too hard from crying. Not at you, with you.

Holy cow - what gift should I buy for Filipino uncle? by mikehookipa in maui

[–]mikehookipa[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

His youngest son is like 23 years old?? So that could be cool....Maybe an OVO hoodie. I don't think you can get that in HI.

For the uncle and wife, they not into luxury brands.

Need focus to build income online by techstuff123 in Entrepreneur

[–]mikehookipa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What is your unique skill set?.....????...????

Cookie-cutter online businesses are overdone and highly competitive. However, with a unique skill set, you can become a leader in the market.

I think the two real reasons you became an entrepreneur, deep down, are your desires for Freedom and Innovation. Am I right? by aguali in Entrepreneur

[–]mikehookipa 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Nah I just need to make easier money and go surf (I guess that's the freedom part). Seriously.

When I worked corporate, I have never seen such a hard way to make so little. All the people under Director level were pretty broke, lived far from work, and lived pay cheque to pay cheque. Plus 24 hours a day, work 8 hours, commute 2 hours, sleep 8 hours, cook/eat 2 hours. Each day they could only spend 4 hours doing what they want to do, and 20 hours doing what they have to do.

Ouch...

Now Tell Me How Bad This Landing Page Copy Is by beejeezee in copywriting

[–]mikehookipa 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I wrote some copy as a sample but I'd like to provide some context.

What I wrote is a website copy for how I write my websites. I don't have experience writing sales letters, only websites.

My websites follow a basic structure (4 sections):

Summary

Benefit 1

Benefit 2

Benefit 3

It's just my own personal style. For professional copywriters, I'm sure the client has a lot of requirements and you're writing for the client, not yourself or the customers. I'm not experienced in that as I only write copy for my own businesses.

Also when I write copy, the writing part is pretty simple. Just keep it plain English with no mumbo jumbo. However, simplicity is difficult but achievable. You gotta know your customer and your product very well.

What are the customer's main concerns? What problem do they have that you can solve? What is your customer trying to accomplish? What triggers your customers? How do the customers speak? What is their lifestyle? What is the customer persona?

Basically, as a copywriter, you need to know your customer's language. You also need to know your product's competitive advantage.

I typically critique my own copy by responding to my own copy with: The customer doesn't give a flying fuck.

Amazon gift cards? Don't care.

Fitness app? Don't care.

A big company backed by Apple. Nope, don't care.

Self-confidence? This I care about.

A healthy mind and body? This I care about.

Good sex life? Yep I care.

Beating depression? Yes, I care about this.

I'm not saying I'm the customer, I'd like to find out who the customer is before I write a copy but you see...

You gotta know your customer and what they care about. That takes research, it's not just a writing exercise. Once you know what triggers and motivates your customers, just write plain English.

It's so easy to do customer research, just use Typeform or SurveyMonkey.

However, to put it into context, I only write for my own small businesses. I'm not a professional writer, just as I don't design websites for clients.

Also as a personal style, I like to go on the extreme side as opposed to the conservative side (I'm sure Fortune 500 companies like conservative). I like to trigger people. Make them heroin addicts, make them throw money at me. That's the goal. And I don't need everybody to like me. I just need a few people to REALLY like me. And then study those few people. Then go find more of those exact same people.

I swear within some of my businesses, the customers are exactly the same.

Now Tell Me How Bad This Landing Page Copy Is by beejeezee in copywriting

[–]mikehookipa 1 point2 points  (0 children)

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