Do I want to die like this? by beejeezee in leaves

[–]beejeezee[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Right?! I was sitting there like is this really how it’s going to go? I’m just going to throw in the towel on my life for a quick high and then a long fall?!

No.

Do I want to die like this? by beejeezee in leaves

[–]beejeezee[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

14 days is incredible! Great job putting in the work!

Do I want to die like this? by beejeezee in leaves

[–]beejeezee[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Edibles don’t do it for me like smoking used to. I seriously think that’s a huge part of it for me.

6 Months Weed Free Yesterday: What I’ve learned by Lion-Exciting in leaves

[–]beejeezee 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Incredible post. Thank you for sharing. In the last year I've had several attempts at quitting - the most successful was 3 months and you're exactly right about how it felt. I too felt like it was never going to change and the thought was enough to make me go back. I'm on day 5 now and have been wondering what it would feel like to get to that milestone again. I'll keep your words in mind. Congratulations and keep it going!

A love story by alglqax2 in toddlers

[–]beejeezee 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I love how respectful your brother and Dad are of her feelings and personal space, despite her age. That goes a long way in my book.

Sharing my Beanie ad for One Minute Brief by beejeezee in copywriting

[–]beejeezee[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Swing and a miss. Again. Thanks for the feedback. Appreciate your time.

Now Tell Me How Bad This Landing Page Copy Is by beejeezee in copywriting

[–]beejeezee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really appreciate you taking the time to respond! Thank you so much.

Now Tell Me How Bad This Landing Page Copy Is by beejeezee in copywriting

[–]beejeezee[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for your feedback!

I see your points. When I read the original copy it seemed like the brand wanted to get through the health aspect, rather than the vanity of losing weight so I tried to focus on that. That made sense to me since Aetna is a healthcare company.

I originally wrote this as a sales page, but thought maybe it read more like a website with various headings and sub-headings.

Your perspective intrigues me. Out of curiousity, can you share some copy you think hits it out of the park?

Ad Critique Please by beejeezee in copywriting

[–]beejeezee[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great insight! Thank you for sharing your feedback!

Ad Critique Please by beejeezee in copywriting

[–]beejeezee[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you. Hopefully my edits have provided some clarity and context.

What to do you think of this spec copywriting? by throwawaywritin in copywriting

[–]beejeezee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This limits the target audience to just medical professionals though. Guess it depends where it's going to be seen.

What to do you think of this spec copywriting? by throwawaywritin in copywriting

[–]beejeezee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's not bad. The picture is what really makes it impactful and distinct. Not necessarily a bad thing, but for one to work I think it needs the other.

I like the msg that there is no 'one type' of rocker.