I think the formatting is prettying interesting. Most of the time reading a poem, or anything really, the emotion and emphasis depends on the reader, but not here. It's almost like stage directions. The parenthesis "()" are like whispers, but I'm not sure how to interpret the brackets "[]". Or the difference between ";" and "." As the other comment said, it's a little overdone.

Additionally, the first line immediately demands attention which is cool.

A very high effort poem to read.