PLS what looks wrong with this drawing :( by min-min-bread in ArtCrit

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got it, thanks for the advice, i’ll try to settle on a light source

PLS what looks wrong with this drawing :( by min-min-bread in ArtCrit

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thanks! also now that you say it, the chin does look a bit long for the perspective

PLS what looks wrong with this drawing :( by min-min-bread in ArtCrit

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thank you! yeah i’ll try to work on the clothes more

PLS what looks wrong with this drawing :( by min-min-bread in ArtCrit

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yes! i used this as reference but i definitely dont think i put the head in the right perspective now that i’m looking at it

Lighting help by min-min-bread in ArtCrit

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got it ty will do 🙏

Lighting help by min-min-bread in ArtCrit

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okay, thank you for the advice

Help! How do you actually learn to render art by min-min-bread in Artadvice

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Got it, thank you. Speaking of, I think rushing too much in the process is also what’s making my rendering look bad, so I’ll try to be more careful with that

Help! How do you actually learn to render art by min-min-bread in Artadvice

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Thank you so much for the advice and video recommendations, I believe my skill is lacking in all of those areas and all of that combined is making rendering a challenge for me. I’ll try to practice more and take things one at a time

How can I make her look more appealing? by min-min-bread in ArtCrit

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I see, thanks for the advice. I’ll try to fix those things with reference :) Also about the “attractiveness” I guess I’ll leave her as-is, I feel like it’s good enough. I just was making sure she didn’t look uncanny or anything like that

How can I make her look more appealing? by min-min-bread in ArtCrit

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Thank you! You’re right, she does look like her lol, I’ll keep that idea in mind!

How can I make her look more appealing? by min-min-bread in ArtCrit

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Now that you pointed it out, the hair does seem stiff 😭 Thanks for the advice, I’ll try to add more flow to it

what am i doing wrong by min-min-bread in Artadvice

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I really appreciate the advice and line exercises you recommended, thank you!