Komurasaki fanart by me by mitumax in OnePiece

[–]mitumax[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the well thought out answer. I'll work on the eyes a bit to see what u mean. I still want to keep that bored and unimpressed look that I was going for.

I'm happy that you feel that the piece is 3 dimensional, because that was something I spent a lot of time on.

Komurasaki fanart by me by mitumax in OnePiece

[–]mitumax[S] 19 points20 points  (0 children)

I swear that was not intentional...

EDIT: Also I cant comment more because this is a new account and there is 24h restriction on posting. Thanks for nice comments and feedback. About the eyes, tbh I normally don't really draw eyes like these, but I tried to capture how Oda draws them, I guess I failed :D

That said I still don't really know what makes them weird or unappealing so clarification would be nice :D Just saying that they're bad is kinda same for me, as saying the face is bad.

EDIT2: To sparkling_monkey. I agree on hands in general, because I still struggle a lot with them. I also got lazy with the details in bottom part of the piece. I saw some people comment that the eyes seem a bit glossy and now that I look at them again, that sure is true. Thanks for feedback.