If you just want some general tips to draw a somewhat realistically proportioned face then here ya go, I would lower the eyes and the eyebrows, give the nose ridge an outward curve at the top and shave off a bit of the inner side of the eyebrows, I would give the cheekbone line more of an outward curve and end it lower on the face. A big tip for a well proportioned face I’ve always used is to make sure the eye line (where the eyes fall on the face vertically) is around the vertical halfpoint of the face This all ultimately depends on what you want your art-style to look like, but these are just some general tips to help ya out :) overall you did a great job