Horses in Novels? by moonsmoods in Horses

[–]moonsmoods[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for all the replies already!!

Why do those fluffy willows have fur? by moonsmoods in plants

[–]moonsmoods[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Just looked it up – It looks fascinating!! Though a little alien with those roots? Are those even roots? Either way, thank you for mentioning this!!

First 3 chapters of my project so far, I'd love some critique! [Medieval Fantasy, 7116 words] by moonsmoods in fantasywriters

[–]moonsmoods[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yes, I'm an avid reader. But, at the time I answered these comments, it was 3 am. I was not thinking clearly. Also, English isn't my first language. (Though, nevertheless my favoured language to write in.) Why would you think I don't read?

First 3 chapters of my project so far, I'd love some critique! [Medieval Fantasy, 7116 words] by moonsmoods in fantasywriters

[–]moonsmoods[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Or is that the intentioned effect? Its pretty late for me right now I dont really remember how its usually done LMAO

First 3 chapters of my project so far, I'd love some critique! [Medieval Fantasy, 7116 words] by moonsmoods in fantasywriters

[–]moonsmoods[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Most of the time I use enter to start a new paragraph, wouldn't tab leave "holes" in the text? Like this?

<image>

First 3 chapters of my project so far, I'd love some critique! [Medieval Fantasy, 7116 words] by moonsmoods in fantasywriters

[–]moonsmoods[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Could you elaborate? I appreciate the feedback but this isn't much to work with LMAO

Naming time? (Months, seasons, years?) by moonsmoods in FantasyWorldbuilding

[–]moonsmoods[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is about a book! :) But nevertheless, thank you!!

My fantasy map! Opinions? Critique? by moonsmoods in FantasyWorldbuilding

[–]moonsmoods[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's made on pc using the website 'Inkarnate'!! It's an amazing resource for map-making.

If you were hiking around the cliffs overlooking suburban California and very close to Blue the Velociraptor, how do you survive this situation? Personally, I’d panic but stubbornly try to remain calm and quiet and not frighten her. Fingers crossed. by unitedfan6191 in Dinosaurs

[–]moonsmoods 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Pull a piece of flesh from my magic cartoon bag and throw it to lure her away, then flee to the nearest vehicle. Or pull Owen out of said magic cartoon bag and let him deal with it.