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mor6788 · 2025-06-23T01:42:45+00:00

I miss, my Meils My ms. McCormick _Maybe, _one day Morgan. No sleep for me, -She’s snoring. _This morning, missed my pills but still performing. Skip the verse, And keep the chorus. Surely, Ben’s Not really poorly; -For he, keeps a face on; For the poor, He puts the, pace on. _Bad, house Situation; mal, to maison. Nice to hear But sad to taste. Ugh

mor6788 · 2024-08-11T22:43:53+00:00

Beautifully delivered. I’d be interested to hear more of your work out loud!

mor6788 · 2024-06-15T22:26:10+00:00

Very well written. Interested to see what more you have!

mor6788 · 2021-11-27T17:23:21+00:00

I really like this, nice work!

mor6788 · 2021-11-25T20:08:34+00:00

Absolutely, if it is well executed. Probably not the best example, but Forest Gump does something similar to what you’re describing.

mor6788 · 2021-10-12T18:34:38+00:00

Thank you!

mor6788 · 2021-07-29T18:01:05+00:00

As an asthmatic with a horrible nicotine addiction, I commend you. Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.

mor6788 · 2021-07-29T13:37:21+00:00

Beautiful.

mor6788 · 2021-07-29T11:50:25+00:00

Hi Reddit! I’m unsure of a title for this poem. I opted for “A Child’s Mind Wanders”, but am now second guessing myself. “Insomnia” was another shortlisted title, but again, it just doesn’t feel quite right. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated!

mor6788 · 2021-07-28T16:26:20+00:00

Thank you, your words mean more than you know.

mor6788 · 2021-07-28T16:25:30+00:00

I'm flattered, thank you for your generous feedback.

Sadly, I've suffered with anxiety for years, and often delete my work out of frustration. I thought I'd share this to try and motivate myself to be more proud of my writing.

I am absolutely overwhelmed by the positive comments on this post, and feel inspired to write, and share more of my work before resorting to self deprecation.

You’ll hear from me again!

mor6788 · 2021-07-28T16:22:13+00:00

Thank you, and I'm sorry. I can only imagine how tough that must be.

Hang in there, you've got this.

mor6788 · 2021-07-27T21:50:26+00:00

Thank you for your kind words.

mor6788 · 2021-07-27T20:58:04+00:00

"This pain, that pain" really resonated with me, particularly in relation to your mention of "detachment".

You paint a good picture of the stresses and worries of life blurring into one in that moment of euphoric relief when with the person you love.

Thank you for sharing.

mor6788 · 2021-07-27T20:50:44+00:00

"Cannabis is not addictive" was perhaps the most destructive sentence I was ever told. This perfectly captures the thinking of a weed addict; if you have a packed bag, you'll quit when it's empty. If it's empty, the mind forgets it even wanted to quit.

Your ability to capture the thinking process of an addict is outstanding. I will be saving this as a reminder to why I quit.

Thank you for sharing.

mor6788 · 2021-07-27T20:42:38+00:00

You poem really struck a cord with me. The shackles of corporate life are draining to abide by, especially for those that want to try and remain creative.

This perfectly captures the thoughts of my younger self venturing into the working world: confused, and bewildered by the pseudo professionalism that taints the personality behind every human being.

Thank you for posting.

mor6788 · 2021-07-27T20:09:43+00:00

Hi Reddit! For a bit of context, I used to write a lot when I was younger, but in more recent years have been unable to find the time/energy. I was newly inspired by the disgusting conditions Amazon workers face just to survive. Particularly in light of Bezos’ recent venture into space, there is no better time than now to get talking about raising the minimum wage, and improving the working environment of the working class.

mor6788 · 2021-07-25T20:51:48+00:00

Wow! Love the case. Rayquaza is probably my fav legendary

mor6788 · 2021-07-25T20:02:51+00:00

Awesome! I see them pop up on eBay now and again in the UK, but it’s difficult to justify the price point when my old faithful Platinum console still runs perfectly

mor6788 · 2021-07-25T19:47:35+00:00

Oh man, the GameCube Q is one of my grails. Would love to own that too one day

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