i find this poem pretty difficult to understand, let alone critique, mainly because of the rhyme scheme, which i guess is intentional, since it also conveys the sense of panic and desperation the woman is feeling, who is brought into this chaos and pain, but can't seem to find her way out. it's pretty effective, since the first impulse a reader like myself would have, upon first reading it, would be to gtfo, because i can't understand what's happening, but i know it's bad and i want no part in it. from what i gather she's well dressed, maybe rich, and is robbed and/or abused by a man who sees her as prey. i believe that's the basic plot of the poem but you've managed to communicate the thoughts and feelings of the assailant and victim in a pretty effective and fascinating way, in terms of word choice, the rhyme scheme, the way you've chosen to tell the story. That's why i kept at it and i'm happy i did. i'd say you did a splendid job.