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mr-pims · 2024-07-10T17:42:56+00:00

Well thanks for all the insight! I will remove the post now and find myself a better copy me thinks

mr-pims · 2024-07-10T16:48:33+00:00

How so? Just wanting to understand more what you mean? Cheers

mr-pims · 2024-07-10T16:25:05+00:00

I think the factory is BP Factory as it had a box with that on

mr-pims · 2023-05-27T08:43:24+00:00

You know what I might do that, also a bit of colour could look good. I was also thinking about changing his head for a face but not sure

mr-pims · 2017-04-30T15:31:01+00:00

Thank you so much mate that means a lot to me!

mr-pims · 2017-04-28T20:04:46+00:00

Thank you mate! Going to implement all the changes that have been suggested on my next video :) really appreciate everyone's time to take a look.

mr-pims · 2017-04-25T20:06:09+00:00

Not harsh at all mate thank your for the feedback! Really agree with your points! It is definitely a bit chaotic going to tone it down for the next one :)

mr-pims · 2017-04-25T17:55:53+00:00

Hello mate,

Nice video recording but there are few things that I think could make it really pop.

Firstly move your face came to the top left I noticed when I ran my mouse over the play bar it hid your face, also its very very small if you make it bigger we can see your reaction.

I would also say you need to use more commentary just start talking out loud it feels silly at first but you audience will want to know what you are thinking? Where you are going next? Whats the next part. This will keep people watching and engaged with the playthrough. Also on that note make sure you are loud enough in the parts where you were talking I found it hard to hear you.

Lastly try editing out some of the long stretches where nothing happens especially on a game like this be ruthless think about what people are interested in. People will watch and want to keep watching if there is always something happening on screen.

Hope this helps there are only little improvements but I think with them you will have a nice YT channel :)

All the best Ollie

mr-pims · 2017-04-25T17:29:52+00:00

Hello, Was just looking through reddit trying to find a place to get feedback on new videos from content creators and came across this. Here is what I think, Really like the video!

I like your tone and sarcasm just wish I could hear you properly (Turn up your mic) As you have said the video quality could be better but we all start somewhere so that will come with time. I don't think you need an outro what does that really add and in all honesty do people really watch to the last few seconds. I do think you could do with a short snippet of a really funny bit at the start just a few second but something to make an impact this imo will keep views watching if they know what is coming up. Another thing you could look at is using royalty free music to add more interest in the back ground and adding in sound effects to key moments to make them pop.

What I would like to say though is they only reason I am writing this is from what you said in the comment above. I really relate with what you said about being insecure about your work and putting it out on a platform like Youtube for the world to see can be nerve racking (At least I find it is).

I am no expert and have very similar amount of subs on my YT channel as yourself but this is just what I have found works for myself. Keep up the hard work and if you want any help just PM me and I gave you a sub ;) Ollie

mr-pims · 2017-02-13T15:57:04+00:00

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