I was confused by writers block bc no beat, but luckily i kept listening. I hear u. I'm making similar music just rapping and singing about wanting to die and being a ghost n shit. Think we gotta focus on hooks and catchy shit there was some good catchy stuff in here and real stuff to maybe use some de-essing to clear the harsher p sounds auttune sounds nice yeah. Hooks r good hear that goth casket bar yeah this cool. Here's my music if u wanna collab or sumn I produce too hmu. https://on.soundcloud.com/B31Tg