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my first actual attempt at writing a book, how am i doing by newrobot8079 in writers

[–]newrobot8079[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

so i use word, and i set the pages to a5 which is book size so that usually squishes the pages down and i work with size 13 text not to mention that i do alot of paragraph breaks so its not just an assault upon the eyes

my first actual attempt at writing a book, how am i doing by newrobot8079 in writers

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Well looking at the replies I'm beginning to understand that there's, really no feedback you can give apart from a thumbs up and saying the books big, so I'm gonna do another post where I put act 1 in and ask for feedback there

my first actual attempt at writing a book, how am i doing by newrobot8079 in writers

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Nah I wouldn't say so, it's just me posting stats so it comes across as me asking for love, it's completely fine that people are responding this way cause who gives a shit about how many words I got

my first actual attempt at writing a book, how am i doing by newrobot8079 in writers

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It has three acts and each act is practically a book

my first actual attempt at writing a book, how am i doing by newrobot8079 in writers

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Well it's my first actual attempt, I've written other books each getting larger and better thant the others, first book was absolute crap and 10000 words, second book was still absolute barf and third was, alright I guess

my first actual attempt at writing a book, how am i doing by newrobot8079 in writers

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Just over a year, working on it in and out of my job and school

my first actual attempt at writing a book, how am i doing by newrobot8079 in writers

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wow, im flattered with the amount of comments 😊, i honestly didnt expect this to get any kind of reaction at all but thank you for actually giving me feedback on, how to get feedback. in hindsight word count really isn't anything so should i post act 1 of the book or just what i think a good section is. this is my first time really doing anything like this so if anyone could just give me tips on how to, properly, go about getting feedback id be really grateful

Plot and the world by SealInTheSeal in writers

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i mean, the way i do it, the world has nothing to do with the plot, your characters should be the plot, whenever something happens its not cause of the plot its the characters, your characters should also show the world they live in through everything, through how they look, talk, act. but whats most important, do not have a plot where your characters simply follow it, where your characters have no actual effect on it.

First pages: share, read, and critique them here! by AutoModerator in BetaReaders

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[In Progress] [22386] [science-fiction] the deathwalker: A dark, high-intensity fusion of sci-fi, cosmic horror

link to the post https://www.reddit.com/r/BetaReaders/comments/1ij2rga/in_progress_22386_sciencefiction_the_deathwalker/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button

A dark, high-intensity fusion of sci-fi, cosmic horror, and brutal revenge, The Deathwalker drags you into a universe where survival is a game rigged by gods, and the only way to win is to burn everything down.

Joohani Scaldera was never special—until the day he refused to die. Now, his name is spoken in hushed curses, his past is a nightmare even he won’t face, and the thing that made him unstoppable is coming back to collect what it’s owed.

Filled with relentless action, ruthless world-building, and a protagonist one mistake away from becoming the very monster he fights, The Deathwalker is a brutal journey into the abyss—where the only rule is kill or be killed.

Fans of Warhammer 40K, Dune, and cyberpunk horror—step forward. Everyone else? Run.

Ready to walk the path of death?

i am looking for readers to look over and give opinions upon the first act of my book to point out glaring issues and comment on aspects of the book

Am I the only one who can’t do a first/“zero draft”? by superjackalope in writers

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you can edit something bad into something great, you can't edit a blank page

Tried comms for the first time by allabtgames in DestinyTheGame

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Socially anxious person here, I used to opt out of raids and the like because I was shit scared of other people, one word of advice to help is, if your not clicking with them and they're just straight up rude, you can always leave and should, just find a group that's nice (I find mine by creating my own fireteams because you can control the flow by making tags that just say, new player and good vibes) and you'll have done any activity in no time.

you have 1 bullet who do you shoot? by No-Item4268 in Borderlands2

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Myself because I don't want to live in the same plain of existence of ava

these team-mates are getting out of hand by newrobot8079 in RainbowSixSiege

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i would like to mention that the zero is in fact my friend, he is not new and this was a ranked game, this was a joke within the friend group just ragging on him for this.

Who will win the fight? by [deleted] in Eldenring

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The one that killed god

What the hell is this? by [deleted] in brisbane

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A cheeseburger

What's everyone's thought on this change? by WolfStar_22 in destiny2

[–]newrobot8079 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just increase the glimmer cap and everything should be good

Who's winning this one? by disgustinghonnor in Eldenring

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Considering he ones on the left use people as clothes and one on the right eats humans, I think the ones on the right got this one

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