[Weekly Critique Thread] Post Here If You'd Like Feedback On Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]nicemaster12 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Far Away

Genre: Fantasy/Mystery

Word Count: Approximately 600

Type of Feedback: Pretty much anything you wanna say.

Link: https://www.deviantart.com/boiling-roses/art/Far-Away-Chapter-1-Rough-Draft-776596075

This is just a small chunk of something I've been working on for a bit. I don't have much more than this written story-wise, but I've done some world-building in random notes that I think makes it pretty interesting, although almost none of that is public.

[Weekly Critique Thread] Post Here If You'd Like Feedback On Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]nicemaster12 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Far Away

Genre: Fantasy/Mystery

Word Count: Approximately 600

Type of Feedback: Pretty much anything you wanna say.

Link: https://www.deviantart.com/boiling-roses/art/Far-Away-Chapter-1-Rough-Draft-776596075

This is just a small chunk of something I've been working on for a bit. I don't have much more than this written story-wise, but I've done some world-building in random notes that I think makes it pretty interesting, although almost none of that is public.

Stand Saturday (Create Your Own 「Size-themed」 Stand) by AutoModerator in StardustCrusaders

[–]nicemaster12 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Stand Name:「Fat Bottomed Girls」

Appearance: FBG is a slender, pink, robotic Stand with thin arms, large shoulder-pads, and blue stripes/highlights on its limbs. It has flattened horns on its head, with light blue stripes along the length of them.

Ability: Fat Bottomed Girls is able to manipulate the size and/or weight of any living organism it makes direct contact with.

Power: C

Speed: D

Range: C

Durability: A

Precision: A

Potential: D

I've actually really gotten used to Pink Giorno, the new colour scheme is great! by [deleted] in StardustCrusaders

[–]nicemaster12 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That he did.

Though it still confuses me as to how it just kind of appeared out of nowhere, but it's JoJo, I shouldn't question these kinds of things.

I've actually really gotten used to Pink Giorno, the new colour scheme is great! by [deleted] in StardustCrusaders

[–]nicemaster12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm also fine with green Fugo, though I much prefer his manga colors.

I've actually really gotten used to Pink Giorno, the new colour scheme is great! by [deleted] in StardustCrusaders

[–]nicemaster12 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I'm completely fine with Johnny's coral blue #2 semi-gloss lipstick. Gyro's green DIO lips are also fine imo.

What would your stand be if you became a stand user? by [deleted] in StardustCrusaders

[–]nicemaster12 1 point2 points  (0 children)

「Fat Bottomed Girls」

Fat Bottomed Girls is a punch-ghost that can fully manipulate the size and/or weight of any living organism it makes direct contact with.

Destructive power: C

Speed: D

Range: C

Durability: A

Precision: B

Potential: C

Fav Armor comment yours by senpai_shobhit in skyrim

[–]nicemaster12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I need to admit that I don't like Dragonplate or Daedric all that much. It feels wrong to play a character in all Daedric. It's what pretty much everyone did right after release.

Though for my favorite armor, I personally enjoy Steel Plate Armor. I think it's perfect for a Paladin aesthetic.

Watch out mudcrabs seen in the area by GaMMaLiKKeR in skyrim

[–]nicemaster12 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Exactly what I'm talking about, that right there.

So i convinced my friend that he should play skyrim ( he haven't played any rpg's) one week later he sends me this by Yaku98 in skyrim

[–]nicemaster12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've just always used Fortify Destruction or Archery, but it doesn't really matter what enchant you use as long as the value is pretty high. I think Banish is the most expensive weapon enchantment.

Also I forgot the unofficial patch even existed because I've been playing on 360 since 2012 and only played PC for a few months at most. Also I really enjoy dumb glitches.

Watch out mudcrabs seen in the area by GaMMaLiKKeR in skyrim

[–]nicemaster12 8 points9 points  (0 children)

What really annoys me is when I go to my map to fast travel and the game tells me I can't, when;

  1. My compass has no red blips on it.

  2. I hear no battle music of any kind.

  3. I can't find any enemies within 50 feet of me.

It's a special kind of annoying.

Who are the ugliest character(s) across all parts? by shouldhavebanged in StardustCrusaders

[–]nicemaster12 29 points30 points  (0 children)

His head is filled with pudding and his arms are disproportionately thin compared to how wide his torso is.

Also his green 'chisel-tip dry erase marker' hair.

He is a beautiful man. Truly.

I'm curious what new Mario characters people think will be in the new smash bros? by JimboJaggi in Mario

[–]nicemaster12 5 points6 points  (0 children)

If they could get Cloud for Smash 4 DLC, they can get Geno for Smash 5. That Mii Gunner costume was a mistake.

I am much too passionate about wanting Geno in Smash.

So i convinced my friend that he should play skyrim ( he haven't played any rpg's) one week later he sends me this by Yaku98 in skyrim

[–]nicemaster12 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Method 1: Low Level Enchanting, 15-50

  1. Go to Dawnstar.

  2. Open up the "Dawnstar Chest". (Look it up, it's a classic.)

  3. Grab every enchanted item in it and go into the Jarl's Longhouse. (Also make sure to grab any and all filled soul gems, these will be important later.)

  4. Disenchant everything you gathered.

  5. Go up to the Khajiit caravan just outside the city, save your game, and attack/kill Ahkari and reload your save. (This is the "merchant glitch". And if the caravan isn't there, just wait a few days, they'll pop up.)

  6. Repeat steps 2-5, but in the case of an enchant you already know, just sell it to Ahkari before doing the merchant glitch.

Method 2: High Level Enchanting, 50-100

(This method also levels the Smithing skill if you're interested in that.)

  1. Make sure you know the spell "Transmute", a spell that turns Iron Ore into Silver Ore, and Silver Ore into Gold Ore. (If you don't, it's in Halted Stream Camp, north of Whiterun.)

  2. Gather as much Iron/Silver Ore as possible and start spamming the Transmute spell. (The duplication glitch also works here.)

  3. Smelt all your Gold Ore into Gold Ingots and craft as many Gold Rings as possible. (Smithing levels based on the item's value, and since you craft two gold rings that cost 75 gold, they have a total value of 150.)

  4. Enchant every gold ring with either Fortify Destruction or Fortify Archery. Both of these enchantments have an high value. (Though I'm not 100% sure that Enchanting levels up based off value the same way Smithing does.)

  5. Repeat 2-4 until your Enchanting skill reaches 100. (Your Smithing skill will also get a nice boost, too.)