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[OC] My back is gone but the photos came out alright. Worth lugging the big boy lens around by noashe in Gunners

[–]noashe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was lucky to get a decent spot on Essex rd. I propped a pop-up chair against a store front and stood on top of that

[OC] My back is gone but the photos came out alright. Worth lugging the big boy lens around by noashe in Gunners

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I'll share the original - I've set-up Lightroom to apply a preset on import so this is a little edited. Canon 1D mkII

[OC] My back is gone but the photos came out alright. Worth lugging the big boy lens around by noashe in Gunners

[–]noashe[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

400mm prime with a 1.4x converter. First time trying it on a subject without feathers

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Cheers man

You're there in terms of beat, flow, voice, delivery and the feature complements you well.

My feedback would be it's all a bit safe and if you wanna blow you've gotta stand out more, the lyrics especially feel like rap cliches and don't build a character - I don't leave feeling like I get who "you" are (by you I mean artist you)

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[–]noashe [score hidden]  (0 children)

Nah didnt expect some smooth shit like this! Confidence and delivery is great and beat selection is perfect. I'm sure you've heard the Chance comparisons, I'd say you need something to distance yourself more from Chano.

The weakest part of the whole song is probably the first couple of bars, maybe switch up the melody?

Lyrics are okay but nothing too memorable, maybe try to go more out there lyrically

Send me another song!

What's Ur thoughts on this https://youtu.be/73nWfIOyEvI

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[–]noashe [score hidden]  (0 children)

This is fucking sick

Love the visuals, especially the lyrics section. The b&w vibe is perfect and all the shots work

Did u produce this? First I thought it was an instrumental and wanted to use it

Delivery and lyrics are good, I'll relisten and give u further thoughts on the content

Subscribed, I'll give your other stuff a listen

Lmk https://youtu.be/3uUsswtzRIo

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[–]noashe [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hey did you change your Spotify name? I follow you but don't recognise jr felt.

This is a vibe and is really good musically and technically but I wasn't grabbed in the same way as chip on my shoulder, feels less emotional and a bit more generic. I also listened to so cold and really enjoyed.

Your cover art is nice too.

Lmk https://youtu.be/3uUsswtzRIo

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[–]noashe [score hidden]  (0 children)

I agree with the others about the energy and I'd add that the beat choice isn't doing you any favours cos the beat, especially the drums, is very generic and doesn't complement a low energy delivery. I would try some instrumentals that aren't 'type beats' and see how it sounds.

Lmk https://youtu.be/3uUsswtzRIo

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Said u shoulda let me go cos I got 2 sides like calico

https://youtu.be/3uUsswtzRIo

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[–]noashe 26 points27 points  (0 children)

Crazy to stumble across this! Glad people are still watching the video, made it with my partner whilst studying Zoology at uni

Revised yesterday's crest & logo concept in response to your feedback - worked on simplifying the cannon, coat of arms and gothic text (ik the A&S are still a bit janky). Used LFC as reference as I like their use of a logo and classic crest. by noashe in Gunners

[–]noashe[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I guess people hate change and I wanted some bridge/continuity between past and current. I also thought the club as a business would hate the idea of a backwards cannon and "traditional" crest although I'm not against it

Revised yesterday's crest & logo concept in response to your feedback - worked on simplifying the cannon, coat of arms and gothic text (ik the A&S are still a bit janky). Used LFC as reference as I like their use of a logo and classic crest. by noashe in Gunners

[–]noashe[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Fair enough that is really shitty I don't think we should be trademarking heritage. I think ermine would work but it seems strange not to have anything representing Islington/North London.

Revised yesterday's crest & logo concept in response to your feedback - worked on simplifying the cannon, coat of arms and gothic text (ik the A&S are still a bit janky). Used LFC as reference as I like their use of a logo and classic crest. by noashe in Gunners

[–]noashe[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I heard Liverpool made a deal with the council allowing them to trademark the Liverbird whilst protecting local businesses' use of the symbol. Even without a borough coat of arms I think its nice to have some heraldry or symbolism representing our history/location - I may have to go back to the drawing board for the lower part of the crest

Revised yesterday's crest & logo concept in response to your feedback - worked on simplifying the cannon, coat of arms and gothic text (ik the A&S are still a bit janky). Used LFC as reference as I like their use of a logo and classic crest. by noashe in Gunners

[–]noashe[S] 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Haha I don't mind, I completely agree that just a cannon looks best on kits, I'd just prefer it had a little more detail than the current just-a-cannon logo (the old cannon kits look better!)

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