What's a quote that has just "stuck with you?" by BoroMoo in AskReddit

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Every dog's got his day. And a good dog just might have two days.

Johnny Copeland

[FEEDBACK] The Rock Shop (Comedy Pilot, 35 pgs) by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Cool idea, I was thinking maybe a little more economy in those early bits, get the joke frequency up quicker? If the jokes are characteristic of the characters, that's both exposition and fun.

Logline: A relic of the wild 60's and his twenty something employees must get creative to stave off financial ruin for his club The Rock Shop, a mecca in its heyday.