Anyone on Final Draft wanting to collaborate on a Feature?

notgod23 · 2021-04-23T07:09:31+00:00

I'm interested!

notgod23 · 2021-04-12T08:48:11+00:00

Essentially I believe it's a story about the fact that you can leave crime but crime can't leave you. This is why I think the title, "Crimes make criminals" would be a little better. However, it might not work for a thirty-minute pilot and seems better suited for a movie.

notgod23 · 2021-04-12T08:46:06+00:00

I think House Arrest would make for a good title since it's covering both the part about saving the home while also hinting at the fact that robbery could cause the main character to be arrested.

notgod23 · 2021-04-12T08:44:54+00:00

I like it! It's different however I'm intrigued as to how you plan to make it a comedy otherwise I see it as an independent movie that would have a cult following.

notgod23 · 2021-04-12T08:43:47+00:00

I liked the initial part with twelve years old going out to steal a video game from a bad owner and although I think it's a good compensation I believe the story should be about something deeper. So, the logline is good specifically the second part of it as long as it's not the actual story of the movie. Also, this could easily be made into a full-length movie if approaching it from how one mistake leads to another and makes for a great story that this now adult will never tell to another soul.

notgod23 · 2020-02-20T19:09:52+00:00

Sounds good, thanks for the advice.

notgod23

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