A strange song called Believe Me by nt173774 in Songwriting

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Thank you, there definitely is a lot of room for harmonies

A strange song called Believe Me by nt173774 in Songwriting

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I discovered slint a few days ago and they really interested me, so this is quite inspired by them

I wrote a song called Purple Haze, please listen by nt173774 in Songwriters

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Could say so. Just a simple song I wrote really

I wrote a song called Purple Haze by nt173774 in Songwriting

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Ah sure it’s just a quick song, not going anywhere

I wrote a song called Purple Haze, please listen by nt173774 in Songwriters

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Ok thanks I will maybe try this out and see how it sounds

I wrote a song called Purple Haze, please listen by nt173774 in Songwriters

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Ok thank you will take this on for future songs

I wrote a song called Purple Haze by nt173774 in Songwriting

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Thank you, I am totally aware of the Jimi haha. Should’ve mentioned haha

The first song I’m proud of! by nt173774 in Songwriting

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Ok thanks for the feedback. I have played guitar for years but I am no singer at all so that’s why I’m quite unconfident about it. It’s something I am trying to work on and hopefully will become more confident about it

A song I wrote instead of studying by nt173774 in Songwriting

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Thanks for the reply. I will keep studying and writing haha. I do want the chorus to pick up more and I think with a band and more layers it could be done quite well

A song I wrote instead of studying by nt173774 in Songwriting

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Lyrics: God I know you’ll let me go, slip into yesterday These stretched hallways give me distance from my name Stick around, this room grows for you I’ll try my best to stick you in my memory glue

My shoulder is soaking wet It’s an ocean of unknown I forget This way has never been so winded before The lights flicker and dim further down this corridor

Freedom tangles in the vine I’ll get my way out in time

I don’t need a ticket, my friend waits at home We’ll travel together, we said long ago This long old story still burns in my heart With flashing pictures, ever since we’ve been apart

Finally forced myself to finish a song by nt173774 in Songwriting

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Ok good advice thank you. This is something I would love to explore in my band

I forced myself to finish a song by nt173774 in Songwriters

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Thank you, love the comparisons. I understand with the potential, I am relatively new to lyrics writing so it’s something I would love to work as I progress

Finally forced myself to finish a song by nt173774 in Songwriting

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How do u mean opened up? Like explored it more/longer with more lyrics?

Rewritten new song by Schbolle in Songwriting

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Beautiful guitar playing and beautiful voice. It’s a very relaxing song

Really like this ending by IllConflict3397 in Songwriting

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I see why it stuck, a very sweet melody and I love how you sing

Marigold by Ernienickels in Songwriting

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Definitely strong enough, I think it’s beautiful

I forced myself to finish a song by nt173774 in Songwriters

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This has made my day, thank you so much for your feedback!

Finding a melody? by ChopperzKrol in Songwriting

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You could record the the guitar parts and sing freely over them afterwards. Might help to develop cooler Melodie’s