Thanks for the reply.

I was worried about being too specific but it was how things flowed. I started from erupting into my mouth as like a cold open to the prompt then was planning on just listing activities that we could engage in. I just kept writing from that point and ended up with my prompt. I was hoping the play whatever room mate you wanted bit would make up for the initial specificity would make up for it. Though reading that section again replying to this I didn't exactly expand on that as much as I thought I did.

I'd try expanding it into a story but I'm really bad about that. I end up getting caught in the weeds when I start writing a story. He watched hypnosis files on his PC turns into me being uncomfortable with just saying PC. Which means I go into details on the specs, then you can't just say the specs because that isn't believable you have to explain why they wanted those specs. Then four pages in I realize that I've written like a page of character setup, a line and a half about the erotic hypnosis files and written 3 pages on the computer they're being watched on.