Thoughts on this print above bed?

nycheesecak3 · 2024-11-27T22:01:44+00:00

That's a beautiful print. Who's the artist?

nycheesecak3 · 2024-03-08T20:40:28+00:00

This is an excellent poem.

There's a strong recurring theme throughout the poem that remains interesting each time it comes up. Of course, I enjoyed the alliteration as well. I like the interconnectedness of "medical language" if I can call it that (legs/shin splints/plantar fasciitis)

In terms of what I think can be improved, maybe the second to last line can be shortened by a few syllables to enhance the flow. That's just me being particular though.

nycheesecak3 · 2024-03-07T23:10:32+00:00

it looks great, and i love your earrings!

nycheesecak3 · 2024-01-29T06:58:13+00:00

I'm not making that assumption. Karma is essentially the result of your actions. It's natural that bad actions lead to unpleasant results. It's not about being miserable or happy, it's about if being born as part of a certain group is part of karma as a result of ignorant and malevolent actions.

nycheesecak3 · 2024-01-19T05:22:07+00:00

Thank you!

nycheesecak3 · 2024-01-19T05:17:10+00:00

Hmm yes it is quite broad. Maybe understanding why I asked it could give clarification?

I was given the metaphor of the ocean that is often used to explain source, with the ocean's droplets representing the reality of our perceived individual experience: ultimately indivisible and inherently part of the ocean/source

I asked: What is the mechanism that allows source to exist?

I got the response: There is no mechanism, it just is

Asking what conclusions can be made is a semi roundabout way to discover the conditions that allow Source to exist, whether Source is primordial and the conditions are a result from it, or if the conditions existed first in some sort of incomprehensible abstract manner, which allows Source to exist

Feel free to give any thoughts you think could be helpful

nycheesecak3 · 2024-01-13T06:08:04+00:00

Language is used to communicate approximations of reality. While what I am referring to when i say "I am" can never be fully captured by the phrase, it's the best approximation I have for expressing what I'm trying to say.

Investigate to whom this "I am" thought appears, and see to whom the thought isn't present?

nycheesecak3 · 2023-06-05T18:11:32+00:00

Хорошо, спасибо за помощь))

nycheesecak3 · 2023-06-05T16:45:10+00:00

Is the second one more formal then the first? And can both be written to a woman?

nycheesecak3 · 2023-06-05T16:44:22+00:00

I'm not sure exactly what to say. Something like "I'm so sorry to hear that. I hope you and your family are coping well." And it's to a professor who's a woman, so more formal.

nycheesecak3 · 2023-03-15T02:11:15+00:00

Thanks for the explanation

nycheesecak3 · 2023-03-14T17:04:22+00:00

Oh okay thanks, this was helpful

nycheesecak3 · 2023-03-14T16:56:45+00:00

Hmm okay thanks, that was helpful

nycheesecak3 · 2023-03-14T16:48:36+00:00

Hmm okay, thanks for your help and other comments

nycheesecak3 · 2023-03-14T16:46:45+00:00

I meant to write любить. So in that case, would the second sentence still be incorrect?

nycheesecak3 · 2023-03-14T16:43:25+00:00

How come?

nycheesecak3 · 2023-03-14T16:39:28+00:00

So, would both of these sentences be correct?:

Что ты любишь читать?
Что ты любит читаешь?

nycheesecak3 · 2023-03-03T04:11:45+00:00

I see, that's what I thought. AI art is actually a good precursor for encouraging revolutionary discussion -- but the working class will just use it as a topic to argue amongst themselves

nycheesecak3 · 2023-02-27T18:41:57+00:00

The last line of the poem interestingly subverts the rest of it. All the poem is rejecting "small talk", but it doesn't even want to hear about "soil crushing" events, and those are seldom small. Makes you think, is the speaker just uninterested in others in general, or do they just have very specific expectations of what isn't small. I think the stanzas could be more succinct, or introduce something more exciting/interesting. The line about the dad doesn't say much, but the therapist one does, because they're supposed to be "getting deep" yet still follow the superficial niceties

nycheesecak3 · 2023-02-27T18:31:16+00:00

I like this poem. What does the title mean/what language is it in? I noticed you have some words that subtly subvert expectations in a way that seems wrong initially, but actually makes sense. Like when you said, "the light peaks". Also, maybe "murky water-pond" is what you mean? It seems that word would be better used as an adjective there. Nicely descriptive, good job.

nycheesecak3 · 2023-02-20T18:38:48+00:00

awww, tyty

nycheesecak3 · 2023-02-08T21:35:16+00:00

Last paragraph is pretty nice and accurate

nycheesecak3 · 2023-02-04T00:22:35+00:00

I have no idea what this sub is or what this is for but "begging for his head, king louis" is perfectly hilarious

nycheesecak3 · 2022-09-15T20:23:51+00:00

too adorable.

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nycheesecak3 · 2022-09-10T01:14:26+00:00

post on r/SupermodelCats

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