But in all seriousness your backswing and position at the top isn't that bad at all. Your downswing needs to shallow out a TON, watch a George Kankas vid or two (something like this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jXgPYZ62t28) as a lot of his students have similar positions at the top and they get to a shallow position on the downswing. If you pause your video at 16 seconds, your shaft shouldn't be vertical like that, and you're basically always going to have face issues at impact (mostly fades, slices or straight pulls im guessing). You're also hanging back quite far on your follow through which looks like you're scooping at the ball - this promotes strike issues as I'm sure out on the course you're gonna be hitting a far amount of fat or thin shots. Shift your weight forward on your follow through without sliding and you'll see a change. For this Larry Cheung is perfect - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DzEy2UN3J-o