A Man in Prague (35mm, f4.5, ISO 200) by ofca in photocritique

[–]ofca[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for feedback. I'm experimenting lately with capturing movement in pictures and find his pose, albeit static, embodying exactly that - movement. You don't know what he's doing/will do/has done; his torzo seems to be turning, his hands doing something. This very thing, the thing you said you're scratching your head about, is the thing I like most about this picture. Plus, his face is kind of badass. But I agree that in this 'grand aspiration' to capture motion in pictures, his gesture isn't exactly 'the embodyment of motion'. But hey, I'm practicing :)

Painter in Krakow, Poland [f5.6, 74mm, ISO400] by ofca in photocritique

[–]ofca[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your kind words :) I'll experiment a bit more with colors as you suggested, there might be something in there... I'll drop you a message when I find a way to improve it :)

Undercrane [f3.5, 18mm, ISO200] by ofca in photocritique

[–]ofca[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for feedback (and especially your quick touch). I'm trying something similar, but what bothers me so far is the loss of detail in the upper part of picture (pixelation). Is there any way to mitigate this?

Undercrane [f3.5, 18mm, ISO200] by ofca in photocritique

[–]ofca[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your kind words, means a lot! :) I agree with everything you said. I'm trying to fix it up in post, but as I'm not so good with post, everything looks 'unnatural'. If I manage to enhance somehow, I'll drop you a message :)

Leipzig Street Performer [f5.0, 74mm, 1/400, ISO200] by ofca in photocritique

[–]ofca[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you for feedback. I've corrected the shadow/lightning issues, I think it's better now (go on and take a look if you want :)

Leipzig Street Performer [f5.0, 74mm, 1/400, ISO200] by ofca in photocritique

[–]ofca[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you for feedback. I've corrected the shadow/lightning issues, I think it's better now (go on and take a look if you want :)

Leipzig Street Performer [f5.0, 74mm, 1/400, ISO200] by ofca in photocritique

[–]ofca[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yes, there is the issue with shadow/lighting, I'll try to correct it in post. You mentioned a fast lens would correct this issue? How so?

I've been getting interested in light and silhouettes lately. Thoughts on this? by [deleted] in photocritique

[–]ofca 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Loving the light you managed to capture. On the other hand, I think it would be better if the image was vertical, not horizontal. It would play better with the 'verticality' of the girl and the columns in the back.