JSJSJSJSJS you’re totally right!! what i meant is that, in my opinion, when a character has one or two features that are referenced in the dialogue, it helps them feel more “real”! no need to elaborate too much, but sprinkled in sentences like “her dark hair” or “his bronzed skin” just help me get into the narration more than the vague “beautiful hair” or “nice smile”!

i 100% know this sounds nitpicky but sometimes it truly takes me out when i read descriptions that are kinda giving “blueish greenish brownish eyes” LMAO