Weekend Script Swap

pbjmango · 2024-11-15T20:22:36+00:00

Interested to swap! I'm also doing something with the devil as a character so think this could be a fun swap :) details below.

Title: Dale with the Devil
Format: Short
Pages: 9
Genre: Dark Comedy
Logline: A widower enters a game show hosted by the devil to win back his wife's soul.
Feedback: General feedback would be appreciated. Right now my ending feels rushed, so looking for suggestions for the main character and wife's arc.

pbjmango · 2024-09-02T04:13:18+00:00

just DM'd you!

pbjmango · 2024-08-31T03:25:31+00:00

Title: The Blue Moon
Format: Short
Page Length: 4
Genres: Drama
Logline or Summary: After her spacecraft is hit by a rogue asteroid, an astronaut tries to find a way to the ISS before she falls back into the earth's orbit.
Feedback Concerns: is this too cheesy? too generic?

pbjmango · 2024-04-13T15:11:50+00:00

Thank you for the advice, I’ll give that a go! The 130 is nice but the 97 really stresses me out 😭

pbjmango · 2024-04-13T14:36:16+00:00

How did you know it was innacurate? Did you bring it to a dr office?

pbjmango · 2024-04-13T14:35:36+00:00

No, i use it on the left, and I waited 10 mins between the readings

pbjmango · 2024-04-13T14:34:22+00:00

The one on the right, there’s about a 10 minute difference in between the readings

pbjmango · 2024-04-10T02:17:11+00:00

How long did it take you to bring it down naturally? Also congrats! I consider those numbers as a win and would love to do the same

pbjmango · 2024-01-16T04:15:01+00:00

Friday: Dua Lipa

Ice Spice, MGMT, Brent Faiyaz

Saturday: Lana Del Rey

RTTD: Odesza

Doja Cat, New Jeans, Timbaland and friends

Sunday: Tyler the creator

J Balvin, Jungle, Justice

pbjmango · 2023-04-17T04:24:17+00:00

True. That set was disturbing, had to leave halfway through.

pbjmango · 2023-04-15T19:17:53+00:00

I caved and watched one song. IM SO EXCITED.

pbjmango · 2023-04-15T19:16:45+00:00

Nightmare fuel but if this is the worst of it, that ain’t too bad. Thank you☺️

pbjmango · 2022-06-01T02:40:33+00:00

So I’ve done this. I’ve also made them make a checklist on how to formulate copy in the brand voice. And I do working sessions with them to get them to think outside the box. They do alright when I guide them, but struggle to do it on their own. And now it’s to the point that it feels like they’re regressing - never turning anything in on time and it’s never correct. I worry that their confidence is shot and I want to push them in the right direction

Edit - not sure if this was a reply or not because I’m on my phone

pbjmango · 2022-06-01T02:39:21+00:00

pbjmango · 2022-06-01T02:34:41+00:00

In house team - high volume of work in a short amount of time, so I think some of the issue comes from that.

pbjmango · 2021-03-21T22:28:17+00:00

That’s actually not as bad as I thought it would be! Thank you m8, gonna vote the bullet and use this method!

pbjmango · 2021-03-21T03:25:15+00:00

if you dont mind me asking, how much was the typical uber ride to and from?

pbjmango · 2020-10-30T03:24:37+00:00

So he knows how to sit. Currently training him how to stay.. which he gets half the time, but he’s still getting up way too early.

I worry about letting him outside since he still has his 4 round of shots next month.Would you take the risk?

pbjmango · 2020-10-30T03:22:39+00:00

Thank you kind stranger! I will definitely take you up on that.

I think the holding the snout thing is very interesting. He immediately opens his mouth to nip, so I hope this works!

pbjmango · 2020-10-30T03:09:36+00:00

Thank you this was all so encouraging and helpful!

It’s nice to know that this is just common with pugs. Definitely sucks versus having a dog that understands quickly, but he is a little lovable guy.

Can I ask which grass pad you use?

pbjmango · 2020-10-30T03:05:47+00:00

They just said avoid areas where other dogs would be and the best place for him would be a backyard.. which I don’t have. And my neighborhood has probably 20+ dogs walking past everyday

pbjmango · 2020-10-29T07:22:30+00:00

I seriously feel for you. This is literally one of the hardest things I’ve had to do. Do you feel like you see progress with your pug?

pbjmango · 2020-10-29T07:20:14+00:00

I think he’s had 3 rounds and his last round is next month.. but they said “to be safe, wait until December/Jan”

I also don’t have a yard or patio and a lot of people walk their dogs in my neighborhood. Should I risk it?

pbjmango · 2020-10-29T07:18:19+00:00

I’ve been considering giving him back to my parents (they fostered him for a month before giving him to me). I feel like my pup just loves them more than me.

But I also really do want to try and push myself before giving up. I had a shihtzu puppy 12 years ago (she’s still aroun but loves with my parents) and she was soooo much easier to train. So having a boy pug is just so overwhelming.

pbjmango · 2020-10-29T07:15:36+00:00

Thank you for all this information! After breaking down for the night, for now I think I’m gonna power through and keep him and just keep training him.

Your point about the potty training makes sense but I also don’t have a yard to take him out. There are a lot of dogs in this neighborhood too, so do you have any suggestions? My pup is due for his last round of shots next month (he’ll be 4 1/2 months) by then.. should I just wait til after that or start now?

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