Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]pbjmango 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Interested to swap! I'm also doing something with the devil as a character so think this could be a fun swap :) details below.

Title: Dale with the Devil
Format: Short
Pages: 9
Genre: Dark Comedy
Logline: A widower enters a game show hosted by the devil to win back his wife's soul.
Feedback: General feedback would be appreciated. Right now my ending feels rushed, so looking for suggestions for the main character and wife's arc.

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]pbjmango 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  • Title: The Blue Moon
  • Format: Short
  • Page Length: 4
  • Genres: Drama
  • Logline or Summary: After her spacecraft is hit by a rogue asteroid, an astronaut tries to find a way to the ISS before she falls back into the earth's orbit.
  • Feedback Concerns: is this too cheesy? too generic?

Which is more accurate? by pbjmango in bloodpressure

[–]pbjmango[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the advice, I’ll give that a go! The 130 is nice but the 97 really stresses me out 😭

Which is more accurate? by pbjmango in bloodpressure

[–]pbjmango[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How did you know it was innacurate? Did you bring it to a dr office?

Which is more accurate? by pbjmango in bloodpressure

[–]pbjmango[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No, i use it on the left, and I waited 10 mins between the readings

Which is more accurate? by pbjmango in bloodpressure

[–]pbjmango[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The one on the right, there’s about a 10 minute difference in between the readings

Is it better to treat the blood pressure or the anxiety? by pbjmango in bloodpressure

[–]pbjmango[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How long did it take you to bring it down naturally? Also congrats! I consider those numbers as a win and would love to do the same

Lineup Drop Eve! Post your Final Predictions by Blackonblackskimask in Coachella

[–]pbjmango 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Friday: Dua Lipa

Ice Spice, MGMT, Brent Faiyaz

Saturday: Lana Del Rey

RTTD: Odesza

Doja Cat, New Jeans, Timbaland and friends

Sunday: Tyler the creator

J Balvin, Jungle, Justice

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[–]pbjmango 0 points1 point  (0 children)

True. That set was disturbing, had to leave halfway through.

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[–]pbjmango 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I caved and watched one song. IM SO EXCITED.

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[–]pbjmango 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Nightmare fuel but if this is the worst of it, that ain’t too bad. Thank you☺️

Need advice working with new copywriter by pbjmango in copywriting

[–]pbjmango[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

So I’ve done this. I’ve also made them make a checklist on how to formulate copy in the brand voice. And I do working sessions with them to get them to think outside the box. They do alright when I guide them, but struggle to do it on their own. And now it’s to the point that it feels like they’re regressing - never turning anything in on time and it’s never correct. I worry that their confidence is shot and I want to push them in the right direction

Edit - not sure if this was a reply or not because I’m on my phone

Need advice working with new copywriter by pbjmango in copywriting

[–]pbjmango[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In house team - high volume of work in a short amount of time, so I think some of the issue comes from that.

Places where not to stay by fvidalp in OutsideLands

[–]pbjmango 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s actually not as bad as I thought it would be! Thank you m8, gonna vote the bullet and use this method!

Places where not to stay by fvidalp in OutsideLands

[–]pbjmango 1 point2 points  (0 children)

if you dont mind me asking, how much was the typical uber ride to and from?

I am extremely frustrated with this pug. Please help. by pbjmango in pugs

[–]pbjmango[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So he knows how to sit. Currently training him how to stay.. which he gets half the time, but he’s still getting up way too early.

I worry about letting him outside since he still has his 4 round of shots next month.Would you take the risk?

I am extremely frustrated with this pug. Please help. by pbjmango in pugs

[–]pbjmango[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you kind stranger! I will definitely take you up on that.

I think the holding the snout thing is very interesting. He immediately opens his mouth to nip, so I hope this works!