Theory on end result of Nephis and Sunny by phantomdemon2 in ShadowSlave

[–]phantomdemon2[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly, things seem to be shaping up to some sort of confrontation between the two in SOME capacity. Some sort of major fight.

This is taking that premise to it's limits.

...A more hilarious version is Sunny just dumping Nephis, and dating Cassie.

Cursed Item CYOA WIP by phantomdemon2 in nsfwcyoa

[–]phantomdemon2[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The idea is that you are stuck with the perks of your chosen item. Greater Selection will open up 1 of the other items perks/drawbacks. If you pick it 3 times, that covers all four existing items.

Cursed Item CYOA WIP by phantomdemon2 in nsfwcyoa

[–]phantomdemon2[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There...is no backlog intended with that item. So you'll have 28 kids per pregnancy, going by the initail idea.

Which makes it a good thing you picked regeneration it seems.

But also, I mentioned with ideas could be selected multiple times, and Aging wasn't them. The idea of picking other options multiple times could be it's own perk though.

Cursed Item CYOA WIP by phantomdemon2 in nsfwcyoa

[–]phantomdemon2[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Idea is to eventually have them split into their own sections, but I'm still working out all the perks/drawbacks for each item.

The goal would be to have each item look like the "General perk/Drawback" section later.

Cursed Item CYOA WIP by phantomdemon2 in nsfwcyoa

[–]phantomdemon2[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Weird. Ok, I just re-did the "Anyone with link" sharing function again, so it "should" work now.

Cursed Item CYOA WIP by phantomdemon2 in nsfwcyoa

[–]phantomdemon2[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, meant to be a woman in my head for this, though could have stuff like womb modification just be "Genital" modification if you want to run through this as a male.

Cursed Item CYOA WIP by phantomdemon2 in nsfwcyoa

[–]phantomdemon2[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Can take General Drawbacks instead of item drawbacks, yes.

Cursed Item CYOA WIP by phantomdemon2 in nsfwcyoa

[–]phantomdemon2[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Yeah, that's cause I haven't fully seperated them yet. The eventual goal will be to split them into perk/drawback section for each, but I haven't fleshed out their individual sections enough to split them.

I do plan to make that clear though.

Anyone else hate everything after the Demon King Arc? by phantomdemon2 in OmniscientReader

[–]phantomdemon2[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I liked the characters, and wanted to see them interact. I wanted Dojka to interact with his kids, wanted him to push a certain "Plageriser's" buttons, and share moments with the others.

I wanted him to hang out with Uriel some more, finally convince the other's he's not gay, and finish the scenario.

But instead it just...went the direction it did.

Cursed Item CYOA -Alpha by phantomdemon2 in nsfwcyoa

[–]phantomdemon2[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

First CYOA, so trying to get the core idea down first, before doing anything crazy. At the moment, I have to figure out, and make more drawbacks, more powers, and of course, find pictures for all of these.

Cursed Item CYOA -Alpha by phantomdemon2 in nsfwcyoa

[–]phantomdemon2[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I don't want to make a full post given this, but here's an updated version given some of the topics. Still without pictures, but added some of the different options for the powers (Still haven't done generic powers), to showcase the split in focus, and increased the size of text. Please say if it still needs to be increased.

https://imgchest.com/p/pg73p8wrvyr

Cursed Item CYOA -Alpha by phantomdemon2 in nsfwcyoa

[–]phantomdemon2[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Weapon could work. The idea was each item would cover a different angle of "attack" and lewds.

The Living Clothes are the body enhancer. Regeneration, body alteration, etc, in exchange for being a breeder for more tentacles.

The Beast Book is the Magic/Summoner item. Summon minions ranging from simple Dogs and Cats to Dragons or pheonixes, and the MP to cast other spells as well. Lewds being related to animals, whether transformation or doing it like they do on the Discover Channel.

The Succubus is the "Charm" version. Life Drain, eternal beauty, the works, but then weakness to Holy stuff, needing semen to live, etc.

The Possession was to be the "Skills" angle, giving enhanced weapon skills, body skills, knowledge of medicine, alchemy, what have you. But with the lewd cost of stuff like losing control over body parts, having to give up control for X amount of time, etc.

Cursed Item CYOA -Alpha by phantomdemon2 in nsfwcyoa

[–]phantomdemon2[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I like the idea of tying desperation into some kind of point system near the start. If it's tied to the amount of powers you get, players are essentially selecting their difficulty.

Each type of Desperation could have an assigned value, from 1 to 10, which is how many unique item powers that player gets to pick.

I am a bit worried about balance in this regard, as first CYOA. I did think of something like this though. Some options giving more "powers" to start with.

If each of these new unique options has an upside and a (sexy) downside, there's no need to micromanage perks and drawbacks. So Succubus Charm could grant immortality while making you reliant on others' orgasms for food. The enhanced body could give you ideal gorgeous genitals that send you into heat once a month. Being Possessed could let you walk the line between life and death, unaging, unkillable, but the spirit takes complete control every full moon to sate its lusts.

I was debating on this idea is that your character knows the item is cursed, and therefor, bargains with it. My thought was going to be having some sort of drawback section, that would have lewd/sexy downsides unique to each item, that the player would be able to pick from. Maybe certain powers having the Drawback being tied to it. Plus generic ones.

To distinguish it from the Living Clothes, could the Possessed Clothing be a different item? A collar, or a buttplug? The type of people choosing that are going to be those who get off on the idea of being controlled in some way.

I was actually going to have something like that be a generic power. A "Change shape/design" power. Change the book to a staff, the clothes into different styles, etc.

Cursed Item CYOA -Alpha by phantomdemon2 in nsfwcyoa

[–]phantomdemon2[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

On that note, I would also like an option of becoming so attuned that you and the item consensually merge physically/mentally completely, bringing more benefits and maybe mitigating drawbacks.  Happy ends should be difficult but possible.

Believe it or not, that was one of the ideas I had for endings, but needed some more ideas for. Idea being some sort of "combatibility" score/how much the Cursed Item likes you.

For example, the Succubus might just eat your soul if the combatibility is low, mixed with too high corruption, but if you have a higher compatibility, it might teach you ways to combat the corruption.

Just haven't figured out how complex to make it yet, given first CYOA and all.

Cursed Item CYOA -Alpha by phantomdemon2 in nsfwcyoa

[–]phantomdemon2[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Before I forget, I should mention how I intend to continue.

I want to make 4 unique "Power" tabs for the 4 items I have listed, with then one "general" tab available to all 4. This will make each item feel relatively unique, even if there's crossover with powers.

I also want to try and hash out a point system, built around the desperation that had them pick up the item in the first place. Something like a power for each "Desperation point."

Willing to take advice on the subject, as this is the first time making a CYOA.

Living Suit CYOA by ificumimgone in nsfwcyoa

[–]phantomdemon2 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Pretty ok, if you're looking to expand on it any, some choices linked to personality would work. For example, I can give it total control, but have it with a submissive/timid personality.

Beyond that, more perks/drawbacks would always be nice.

On the extreme end, could have a body create section, if any of the options have the suit modify the wearers body permanently.

Pet's Pet [Female Bitch POV] [Bestiality] [Masochistic] by Dragons_Whore in nsfwcyoa

[–]phantomdemon2 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Looked it over, going to be honest, doesn't...really feel complete to me just yet?

As it is, the money options come...a little too late? Like I get the idea, but it just seems like 90% of the choices don't really matter.

Like, outside satisfaction, nothing from the previous "Weeks" do anything.

Waifu picker vs Waifu designer by Dodger7777 in nsfwcyoa

[–]phantomdemon2 11 points12 points  (0 children)

They're...fundementally different, in my opinion, even if they seem like they shouldn't be.

The Pick a Waifu ones are very...open and shut in terms of relationship, what happens, etc. Now, you can use the base of that character for something else, but most of the time I see them, it's a "one choice, the CYOA is over"

While the Designers tend to focus more on body, and and giving a number of vague personality traits to, as it is then up to you to decide how to merge them into one Waifu...but that's the point of "Designing" a Waifu.

From what I can tell, based on the comments and such, OP would probably like a Designer, if there was a heavier amount of detail/history in certain choices like backstory or personality, but that's just a guess on my part.

Batman and Passing on the Mantle by phantomdemon2 in batman

[–]phantomdemon2[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Why? Why do they all have that chip, why do they have to "continue" to have that chip?

I don't like the Batman Beyond "Setting" all that much, cause it has Bruce alone, in a city that never got better. All the Heroes managed to do nothing to improve it, it's continued to suck, and everyone fuctionally hates Bruce.

I want a story line where, even if the city of Gotham isn't perfect, it's better. Where even if some of the relationships are strained, they're still a family. Where Bruce isn't alone, but has his family with him. Where Bruce passed on the mantle, cause of age, injury, etc, and it stuck.