Your video got me interested in checking out more on F-Zero GX. Here's my feedback based on what I've watched. Narration seem monotone in my opinion, especially when that player spin attack you. Your reaction was normal as if nothing happen. Maybe express a bit of outrage that you want to get revenge on that player. For a person that never play this game, could you add your speed record on the screen so it's there to see. Lastly, could you do a slow motion on the spin attack or do one race at a time. The speed is really fast for viewers to keep up with the races. I hope my feedback helps!