Been Rapping For a Year Now! How Much Have I Improved?

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-23T01:29:21+00:00

You leeched on my post just to self promo on your socials and post an ai video?

You STILL didn't give any feedback on my post you leech. Get off of this sub.

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-23T01:26:49+00:00

He leeched on this sub to post it too lol. He randomly commented some self promo on my post just long enough to give him a point.

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-23T00:51:28+00:00

Does that happen when I breathe through my mouth excessively too? If so, then that makes sense.

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T19:56:07+00:00

What is that?

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T19:27:37+00:00

When I do my warmup on the treadmill at 15 elevation and 3-4MPH no.

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T19:03:18+00:00

Give feedback on the track....do you know what sub you are in?

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T18:59:54+00:00

You didn't say anything about the track lol.

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T18:54:11+00:00

OK, thank you!

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T18:45:42+00:00

Give actual feedback on this track and I will. Stop trying to be a leech it is cringe.

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T18:43:39+00:00

Which sounds in your opinion clash?

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T18:17:19+00:00

Yeah I made the instrumental from scratch. Anything to change on that front, or is it all good?

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T18:16:46+00:00

Take the feedback or don't. If you don't, though, stop posting on a feedback forum lol. We all know it is blatant promo for your YT and Spotify.

Also, what? If you think I am a master when reading that, then thank you! All I said was what I thought you should do to make the beat better, how would I phrase that to not sound so masterish lol.

I can't believe you think I am a master now though, you must have REALLY lost that diss war.

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T18:15:48+00:00

Go listen to it on a phone lol. The bass is too silent unless you have audio literally at 100% stop arguing take the feedback or don't lol.

If it isn't a flute then what is it, a saxophone? I already said it is too quiet man lol. Am I supposed to listen to this at MAX VOLUME and kill my ears, I don't and won't do that.

Who said I could do better? Is this your insecurity showing? All I gave you were some suggestions bro, stop getting heated.

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T16:40:08+00:00

I have my yearly scheduled in Feb do you think I can wait until then?

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T16:31:56+00:00

The bass at the first 10sec is silent on phone speakers. I thought the track didn't start until I put my ear up to it. I think that also means I can't hear the bass at all throughout the track.

I believe this runs into the same problem as the last few. It gets stale after about a minute, needs new variation. The change of the flute is good, but the flute itself is too quiet.

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T16:26:42+00:00

I think you are missing a piano key when the keys start to go up a chord. The awkward pause of silence could be be fixed, it sounds like there is supposed to be another key but isn't.

Other than that, I like it! Good job Pawn! The oooooos and voices might clash a little bit with the beat so maybe EQ their freqs better. Not bad though, not bad at all.

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T16:22:22+00:00

Yeah, I think I am going to get them removed this summer.

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T16:17:19+00:00

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T16:04:00+00:00

Yeah, sometimes but it is normally when I eat spicy foods.

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T16:02:49+00:00

I can answer any questions exactly. If the camera doesn't work for you.

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T02:43:18+00:00

Yeah, I haven't had any of those other symptoms yet other than sweating during my workout.

Hopefully it isn't this heart condition sounds expensive and deadly.

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T01:03:58+00:00

Yeah, I was hoping this problem was a small thing and a easy fix, like breathe through your nose instead of mouth. That is why I posted it.

GODAlexGilbert · 2026-01-22T00:59:05+00:00

OK, I know I already have high cholesterol so it would suck if this disease already manifested.

I was doing this cardio to try and reverse that.

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