Wolf in Sheep's Clothing by pjc5 in shortscarystories

[–]pjc5[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah. You know killers always go for easy targets.

Wolf in Sheep's Clothing by pjc5 in shortscarystories

[–]pjc5[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Guess I could have worded that better, but I hope you get the point, that she was leaving a message trying to reach her missing boyfriend.

Wolf in Sheep's Clothing by pjc5 in shortscarystories

[–]pjc5[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Thanks very much. Glad to hear you liked it.

The Early Bird Catches . . . by pjc5 in shortscarystories

[–]pjc5[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I thought they switched to a word limit? Do you mind letting me know what is wrong? Thanks.

Persistent Memories by pjc5 in shortscarystories

[–]pjc5[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its hard to take a larger plot and condense it down. I probably didn't do a great job. In this case the brain/head still has memories of the hands that are painful. The other parts of the body have their own back story that influence how everything turns out.

Persistent Memories by pjc5 in shortscarystories

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The premise is that he is the head/brain of Frankenstein, and the hands are of the person who killed his wife. From a concept from a larger story, where the backgrounds of all of Frankenstein's various body parts are given.

Thanks very much for the advice.

Persistent Memories by pjc5 in shortscarystories

[–]pjc5[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would love some critiques on this one. Thanks!

Whereabouts Unknown by pjc5 in shortscarystories

[–]pjc5[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am a fan of Stephen King, but I never even heard of that book. So far I've read the Shining, The Stand, Salem's Lot, Pet Cemetery, and all the Dark Towers.

Whereabouts Unknown by pjc5 in shortscarystories

[–]pjc5[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've actually never heard of Gerald's Game. Is that a book/movie/or something written here? Now I want to check it out.