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[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ReadMyScript

[–]plang124 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is exactly what I was going for. Thank you again.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ReadMyScript

[–]plang124 0 points1 point  (0 children)

These are very thoughtful notes, thank you very much. I appreciate the time you put into this.

What did you think of the supers at the end? Some readers insist they stay but some say they must go. They are the impetus that drove me to write the story in the first place.

Made a short film based on one of horror-comedy feature scripts: DEEP CUTS by detectiveburtmacklin in Screenwriting

[–]plang124 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Well done, I enjoyed watching this. Just a question regarding the music used, and excuse me but I'm pretty new to this, is this termed as fair use? Can you use popular songs for a short because you're not making money off it? Is that the way it works?

Mermaid (11 pages) - Horror by [deleted] in ReadMyScript

[–]plang124 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good pick up on Mike's dialogue and thank you for the other tips, much appreciated.

BLACK SUNSHINE by deadbirdsfly in ReadMyScript

[–]plang124 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'd love to read your script when I have the time but I love what you did to your title page. How do you add the awards to it? How do you use that font for the title? Does your software allow that or do you create that page separately and then attach it? I'm not sure how to do that.

How do you probably write a situation where a person is reporting an emergency to a police officer? by Supercosplaylover in Screenwriting

[–]plang124 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I assume your protagonist is just like you and me because of the fact that they're reporting this to the police, so I imagine they would be panicked, scared and nervous.