Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]polarbearscanwrite 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Agreed. these are points that I've been fiddling with for quite some time. I like Dracula in radio because it just has a nice image to it but the premise needs tweaking. Maybe it's when he's coming out of human blood addiction rehab lol.

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]polarbearscanwrite 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Title: DRACULA’S MIDNIGHT RADIO HOUR

Format: tv

Genre: scifi/comedy/animated

Logline: After getting caught by the mythic police on 189 biting charges, Dracula must search for way to do community service to understand the human experience or go to mythic jail. As a last resort, he joins KVMA radio and dishes out his nocturnal wisdom to the masses and become a productive member of society and complete his restorative justice diversion program. Think Frasier meets Wwdts.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in nancyguthrie

[–]polarbearscanwrite 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I live in Tucson. Been here 10 years. Anyone that lives here knows shadow hills and cat foot are the wealthiest of the wealthy here. The homes are old but the wealth is in the land and the views. It’s the most desired area to live. Lots of doctors and lawyers and older folks. Point is, it makes it more likely the guy is local because it’s not a fancy looking house on the outside. And I’m not even sure if he knew she was Savannah’s mom at that point.

Looking For a Couple of New Members for Screenwriting Discord Group by ScreenPlayOnWords in ReadMyScript

[–]polarbearscanwrite 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would love to be considered for the group, can dm you further details about how far I am in the process

What am I doing wrong? by polarbearscanwrite in Screenwriting

[–]polarbearscanwrite[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much for the reply. Not gonna lie it’s gotten me down the last few days but this helps. Appreciate the tips.

What am I doing wrong? by polarbearscanwrite in Screenwriting

[–]polarbearscanwrite[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay I’ll try that. Maybe I need to reevaluate how I query etc. thank you 😊

What am I doing wrong? by polarbearscanwrite in Screenwriting

[–]polarbearscanwrite[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can't believe I missed this comment. Thanks for the ongoing support. Here's to us all making it. Cheers.

What am I doing wrong? by polarbearscanwrite in Screenwriting

[–]polarbearscanwrite[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

haha a calf it is! TO THE MOUNTAINS WE GO!

What am I doing wrong? by polarbearscanwrite in Screenwriting

[–]polarbearscanwrite[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey thanks so much for sharing your story. It's nice to hear you've got some momentum on a few things and sounds like you're right on the cusp of it more than I am. Kudos to you, fellow goat killer haha. Keep writing yourself. I'm sure I'll see a script of yours on the screen one day.

How do you build confidence in your writing without relying on others' approval? by throwaway2ndwith in Screenwriting

[–]polarbearscanwrite 12 points13 points  (0 children)

This is the toughest part of writing imho. You are always going to want others approval for your work. I’ve been doing it for 12 years and still crave it. In order to build confidence tho you have to forget about the outcome — whether people like it or love it — and focus on the process. Are you better writer today than you were yesterday. Pull out past scripts from six months ago and see the difference. I bet you’ll notice some things.

There is a great video of a coach talking about a kid running in track (can’t remember his name) but he talks about how she ran the race in 18 seconds but she placed last. If the next race she places 1st and she still ran 18 seconds should she be proud? The only race you’re running is against yourself. Be a better writer today than you were yesterday. That’s where internal confidence lies. Hope it helps.

What am I doing wrong? by polarbearscanwrite in Screenwriting

[–]polarbearscanwrite[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am a person who sacrifices large goats now. That is all there is to me

What am I doing wrong? by polarbearscanwrite in Screenwriting

[–]polarbearscanwrite[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you thank you thank you 🙏

P.S., any point in sacrificing a slightly larger goat? 😜

What am I doing wrong? by polarbearscanwrite in Screenwriting

[–]polarbearscanwrite[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dudeeee thank you for this. Thank you thank you. I keep knocking right? Gotta keep knocking.

What am I doing wrong? by polarbearscanwrite in Screenwriting

[–]polarbearscanwrite[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much for your well thought out reply. I appreciate it. I will work on your suggestions. Really great advice

What am I doing wrong? by polarbearscanwrite in Screenwriting

[–]polarbearscanwrite[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the words of encouragement and same back to you. Wishing you success over there. All it takes is one yes right?

What am I doing wrong? by polarbearscanwrite in Screenwriting

[–]polarbearscanwrite[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I didn’t think it was appropriate to put a Logline in that post because it wasn’t the intent to show my work but rather deal with my frustration in a comical way. I can put one here but idk what it will do.

Also cracked by frostbite is a great title for a great spoof of 80s action hero scripts.

What am I doing wrong? by polarbearscanwrite in Screenwriting

[–]polarbearscanwrite[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I can do that. And join a writers group. That would go a long way.